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By : Monddame

From HarryGinny4eva on October 15, 2009
I honestly thought I had reviewed more than I had. I apologize. This story is fantastic and I eagerly await each update. This chapter was sweetly painful. Yes, the sex was angst-driven, but the honest need and acceptance were beautiful. Poor Hermione... so lost and confused. Poor Draco... so confused and in love. Poor Harry... just confused. lol I hope he decides to decide for himself. And, I hope Pansy's machinations don't get too much in the way. Next, I hope Draco finds a way to get on the good side before it's too late to choose for himself. Fourth, I hope you forgive my lack of reviews, as I promise to do better. Last, I hope you update again really soon! Thank you, HG4eva
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From MrsDracoMalfoy93 on October 15, 2009
OMG lol
Harry was being mean to Hermione wasn't he. I wonder what the relationship between the two of them is going to be like from now on. And that's no fair that Hermione gets to jump Draco when she feels bad. Can i have him? pretty please? I'll trade you him for let's say a bag of the lindt chocolates and a hot fudge sundae with a cherry on top with sprinkles. =) Can't wait for your next update. =)
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From LadyMalfoy on October 15, 2009
Reminder to self: Get a mirror.
Thats so sad about Harry though. I mean, I understand that he just needs "time" I would expect him to not be able to accept it right away. But that was so sad about her just curling into a ball and crying for who knows how long. At least Draco was there to save the day.
Keep up the good work, hun. Even if it takes you a bit of time to spit out a chapter, I love reading them.
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From dragongirl on October 15, 2009
That was simply hot and breathtaking.
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From From56to62 on October 15, 2009
Beautiful yet again! I really like how you're progressing their relationship slowly. It finally seems to be comming to some sort of head with Draco falling in love with Hermione. Though I do forsee some problems with Hermione coming to terms with HER feelings for him. Indeed, it could be a question of: Harry or Draco? And is it Pansy and RON making eyes at eachother in the last paragrapghs!? RON??? The 'Lanky, blue eyed Gryffindor' stuff has me thinking!!!! And Pansy's started to blush! HA! That's what you get for using people! (assuming it's Pansy, that is.) Anyway, please please please update soon :D:D:D
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From MrsDracoMalfoy93 on September 30, 2009
nice really nice i can't wait to see what happens next. Though is the third narr. Pansy? I think it is. and can i have an update too? avalonhighgirl@yahoo.com Thanks. And can't wait for the next update. I liked the scene where Draco was like at the boys in his mind back the f**K off she's mine MINE!! All mine lol
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From margaritama on September 30, 2009
lovely chapter in so many ways....the juxtaposition of what the other perceives versus what is happening is quite nicely written. OOOOOO, that ending.....so intriguing.
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From katiekrm on September 29, 2009
So I was thinking the vengeful girl was Pansy, but now I'm thinking it's one of the other girls Draco has slept with. Maybe Cho? What on earth is she going to do to poor Ron? I'm interested to see what Harry says to Hermione. I love that George was the one Hermione lost her virginity to, but that was kind of sleazy to pull the old switheroo. She should have offered him up to a smitten girl and given her some polyjuice as revenge. Draco is being super sweet. I can't wait to see how the dance goes.
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From From56to62 on September 29, 2009
OH MY GOSH I CAN'T BELEIVE I HAVN'T REVIEWED THIS YET! sorry sorry sorry, I just went and read through your reviews to see what I had written to you previously and 'lo and behold, no reviews yet! I have been voraciously reading this from the very begining and I have no idea why I havn't been review. I also really enjoyed the lenght of this chapter! And the idea of the chocolates is just so sinfully delicious, no pun intended lol I absolutely adore your writting and the imagery it provides. It makes me real real jealous. And for the life of me I still can't figure out who the last several paragraphs of each chapter are about!! Pansy perhaps?? Draco is just so cute and caring in this fic, while still retaining much of his canon self. LOVE IT. PLEASE UPDATE. (peferrably much faster then i do) :P
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From margotlefaye on September 28, 2009
I love the way this story is progressing, and the bit about her not being completely sure if she was with Fred as well as George was really cute. Liked the reaction of the Gryffindor boys, and I liked the fact that Draco is willing to take risks to be with her. So, good job. On another note, I had spent about an hour detailing my reaction to all six scenes in Delectus, hit send and everything disappeared! So, since I don't know how else to get in touch with you, in shorthand, go with # 6 (the new wand) incorporate the OMG! HAWT contraceptive charm casting scene somewhere, someplace, (even if you can't fit it in, here) and I liked the recommendation from another reviewer to make #6 include Veela or Marriage Law. #1 was a bit too overthetop, #2's Draco was a bit too mean, #3 was cute but felt complete as it was, #4 was mentioned above, and #5 didn't really grab me. #6 has a nice mix of good characterization and intrigue, so, that's the one I'd like to see more of.

As to the current fic, I want a lot more of that. At every opportunity.
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From ANON - Anon on September 28, 2009
LOL I'm still too dumb to be 100% sure who our mysterious little bitch, er I mean, witch is, but I would have kept reading anyway. And I'm so glad that Draco's decided that Voldermort can't fuck Hermione either. LMAO You are just so brillliant with your comedy. :) But OMG, the Weasley twins (or at least one half) - I did not see that coming. Oh and who was the older woman (Lucius's "friend") that Draco had his way with and got terrified into the bargain?????

Have to add though, by the time I came across this, your other optional story post had been taken down. Don't think they like those kind of challenge things very much which is a pity - I think it's always good to cultivate new ideas for stories.
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From kazfeist on September 28, 2009
Yeah, Margot Gentry (Forgotten Things over at FF.net) has said the same thing about my guessing ability. :D Loved this update, and I love your names for the chocolates! You might take a lot at the Jacques Torres chocolate site: mr.chocolate.com. It's got lovely pictures of his handmade chocolates, both dark and milk. They might be inspirational. I know for a fact they're delicious. :D
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From dragongirl on September 28, 2009
I am intrigue very intrigue... who this third person might be? HUMMMMMMMMMMMMMMM! Let wait to the next I suppose...
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From ANON - amcskimming on September 26, 2009
i'm glad i've found such a great read. keep it up, hope you can shorten the wait for us soon...;)
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From anwarhadi on September 18, 2009
Oh hello Monddame!

Long time no see, ha?

I'm just SO in the chatty mood, because I just re-read the whole story, to catch up with the update.

First what's first:
やったー！(Yatta!)
　(^o^)/
I got another special mention on ch. 4! -thank you so much!- You're adorable too!
*hugs*
and yes... As I see it the audience here has made IT clear: We're all in favour for the mailing list!
(but I was wondering... it would be a kind of useful suggestion for the webmaster of this site, right? see if he/ she could consider to implement this little request... ANYBODY knows where or to whom address for this affairs?)
ejem... back to the mailing list, yes, sign me up please! (anwarhadi86 at hotmail dot com)

About the chocolates: are you sure darling? *pokes Monddame on the ribs slightly* just a tiny box for all of us?!? (hehe... nevermind!. Imagine If you were about to start a business with such an amount of free samples engaged already... *tsk tsk* you'd be broke faster than you can say "Snitch")
if you don't mind, sing me up for the chocolate treat list too!
*winks*

And since we're on the "Wishes List" topic: Can I borrow your Draco for a little while? Reading back, I found myself thinking, I DO wanna wake up with a breakfast tray (not to mention Draco) -like Hermione did on ch. 2- on my birthday! Pleaaase???

Ok. Now seriously, the last chapters: loved them. Hehe... particularly cunning duo: Blaise && Theo!
I beat it's Pansy's dirty flashes we're getting from, right?... (not Astoria! oh for a change, I'd like her to become friends with Herms! I'm such a cheerful, idealistic and ultimately hopeless romantic!... but I'm not by any means trying to impose my wishes to your muse... no! never!)

Did I read correctly?
"and he wanted to be able to
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