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Reviews for The Pairing Hat

By : elibdally
  • From ech1964 on August 22, 2009
    Yea !! I love a Dom!Draco. What I am curious about is a Light!Pansy and Light!Blaise wanting to save their families from the Dark Lord. Just how many scenarios can be made from that idea. Believe? Trust? Betrayal? Who is betrayed? etc.
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  • From kazfeist on August 22, 2009
    I feel very uncomfortable with stories wherein Hermione suffers abuse. I don't think dominance necessarily requires physical force or verbal abuse in order to assert itself. If he's truly in contol, it will be obvious to Hermione. I would prefer to see him best her psychologically. She would not only admit to that more easily, but it will reinforce in her respect for him. From that respect trust can follow, and I think that complete trust between the parties should really be the basis of any dominant-submissive relationship. If Hermione can't trust him, all you are doing is using her as the butt of abuse. I don't think I would be interested in reading that kind of story, sorry.
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  • From msmarvelfreak on August 22, 2009
    Obsessive definitely - there are too few of those, most make him a masochistic evil git - not obsessive and jealous;)
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  • From Gryffindorclutz on August 22, 2009
    I think you could combine the two just a bit. Start out abusive and then move to just obsessive. Lovely chapter dear. I really do think you're awesome.
    Cheers!
    G.C.
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  • From Coipje on August 22, 2009
    After that warning
    I sure as hell know that he can control me that's for sure
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  • From PrincessHildaWerewolf on August 22, 2009
    Aww, this is getting more and more interesting! I do hope that you don't go intot he dubcon/noncon side with this, as even though he can be dominant, forcing her would not be cool.
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  • From lovemalfoy11 on August 22, 2009
    obsessiveDom!!!obsessiveDom!!!obsessiveDom!!!

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  • From margaritama on August 22, 2009
    First off, YAY, betas are fantastic. SOOOOOOOOO much better. This scene was amazing. Great strong Granger and slightly malevolent dommish Draco.

    I think she might be in for a surprise.

    As for abusive or obsessive. I think its clear he's obsessed so it's not really a choice is it? I don't think he'd hurt her (purposely), he wants her and I'm pretty sure he wants to keep her so I'm sure she'll be preggers before the end of year. Its below him to abuse anyone, it's a sign of no control and Draco is, in your words, always in control.
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  • From starrynite45 on August 22, 2009
    I must say I prefer obsessive Malfoy instead of abusive dom. You wouldn't want to disgrace Malfoy name by not being gentleman, would you? Hehe.

    So far, the plot sounds interesting. Keep updating, I'll keep reviewing too!
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  • From slayer5767 on August 22, 2009
    Mmm I like the obessive dom more.
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  • From goldentrio on August 22, 2009
    Officially my favorite Draco/Hermione fiction at the moment =D

    I've seen Draco written as both abusive and obsessive, why limit yourself to one Dom trait.
    But I definitely do favor him being obsessive more. It's just so attractive in a dark way.
    :)

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  • From scarletwitchextreme on August 22, 2009
    a little bit of both dom's for draco
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  • From jlclark on August 22, 2009
    While I am enjoying the story so far; it is a very interesting concept. In regards to Draco I think you should make him 'obsessive' dominate that is maybe a bit abusive. He is a Malfoy after all and must do what is required to maintain his status both in society and with his family. Hermione seems to be in character so far, which I also enjoy. On a side note I checked out your profile and I must admit that I am very hasten to get too wrapped in this fic since you have submitted several stories and not finished any of them. I am not pointing this out to make this review a flame; I am simply calling it to your attention. I am positive I am not the only reader who does this and I have a feeling it will affect your number of hits and reviews. I hope that you do not base whether or not you will continue by the number of reader responses because if you do I can see you getting discouraged very quickly. I say this because I noticed many of your stories have rather low views and responses for the amount of time that have been available. I am positive it is because your stories have been left unfinished; readers do not want to get burned by falling for a story that may not be completed. I sincerely wish that you will continue with this story until it is finished because I really do enjoy your writing style and I think the plot has a tremendous amount of potential. I wish you all the luck and hope to see more of this story soon.
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  • From StoryJunky on August 22, 2009
    I think Draco is an obsessive dom but that is just me. Oh well can't wait for the next chapter I hope it is just a little bit longer than the last one.
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  • From Monddame on August 22, 2009
    I like that Hermione isn't all waify and weak-kneed right away.
    Personally, I feel like Draco must be attracted to Hermione, at least in part, because of her fiery personality. Therefore, it seems a bit illogical that he would be abusive, that he would want to 'train' that out of her, or whatever. Does that make sense?
    Anyway, good work so far. Keep it up!
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