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Reviews for The Pairing Hat

By : elibdally
  • From Avivafae on August 20, 2009
    Ok. I'll beta your story.. Send the next chapter to Avivafae@aol.com. What's your first language by the way?
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  • From prayspivey on August 20, 2009
    I think it should be both a lil dark and lil light to even it out.
    Idk i'll really into this story.
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  • From Citten on August 20, 2009
    Okay I loved the chapter
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  • From Tenar10r on August 20, 2009
    Fairly inventive story; far too many typos.
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  • From chyara on August 19, 2009
    Pro's- I love a good marriage law fic and forced bindings. You have the beginnings of a great story.

    Con's- My head hurt at all of the incorrect word choices. As well as sentence structure.
    In fact I wondered if english was not your primary language.

    You would do well with getting a beta reader.

    Another Pro. You have more guts then I have. I have the ideas for fics in my mind. but have not put pen to paper. [or fingertips to keyboard]

    I am enjoying the fic from what i've read so far (with ignoring the improper grammar).

    You question about whether Draco should be Dark or Light.
    Could you be more specific?
    I'd like a Hermione who is strong and able to dish out what Draco would give her.
    So I wouldn't want to see an abused Hermione.
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  • From jaceni50 on August 19, 2009
    Can't he go inbetween? (in reference to dark or light Draco) Lol, interesting story. Hope you update soon.
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  • From Phiana on August 19, 2009
    MORE, MORE, MORE, MORE!!!!!!!! This is a fantastic start and i am excited for the next chapter!! I want to say dark Draco because lets face it bad is better!! ;-)
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  • From i21forever on August 19, 2009
    U should make this a dark Draco story. The stories with the light Draco arn't very good. I love ur story so far!!!! Keep up the good work! :)
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  • From badalyce on August 19, 2009
    i like how the story is going. i saw that you ask how draco should be. personnally i don't want him to be dark but inlove with hermione.keep writing and i hope to see updates soon.
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  • From Coipje on August 19, 2009
    I think a dark Malfoy is more seductive
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  • From nonentity on August 19, 2009
    Oh no! Ginny and Hermione have been split up! Well, at least Pansy and Draco are happy; that should make things go a bit smoother. Light or dark Draco? How about something in-between?
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  • From jacqui on August 19, 2009
    I'm thinking a dark Draco who learns very quickly that you can attract more flies with honey than with vinegar. I personally like both the rough and the tender sides of him.
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  • From kogaluver on August 18, 2009
    You've already alluded to the fact that Draco likes Hermionne so I'd like to see a lighter side of Draco. But, he's really gotta work to win her over. Even with a scorching kiss, she's not likely to believe that he's not just wanting to use her for fun and bragging rights. That's just my take. Thanks for asking for our opinions.
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  • From 800emz008 on August 18, 2009
    its the great hall not the great hole

    good story though
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  • From lemonade8 on August 18, 2009
    Okay, it's all making sense now. I just needed to wait for another chapter. It will be interesting to see if Draco can get her on his side.
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