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Reviews for The Pairing Hat

By : elibdally
  • From boicrazygirl15 on August 18, 2009
    Awh yes you are updating, but your teasing ! lol leaving us at a cliffhanger. :P

    oh well i cant wait for the next chapter :D
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  • From margaritama on August 18, 2009
    Oh, he's going to confuse the hell out of her isn't he? Laughing really hard.

    PS: You should give it a once over read-through before posting...there were some mistakes here that made some of the sentences just funny "Great Hole"???? LMAO! Sorry. Thanks for the update.
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  • From SilverLion on August 18, 2009
    There are several instances where you used 'hole' when you meant 'hall'. Harry and Luna are already together? Kewl. Luna's always been one of my favorite characters, and she's so easy to use however you want and you'll still stay pretty much true to cannon-Luna. I was wondering something, what if someone involved in this was gay? How would he or she feel about being partnered up in a heterosexual relationship?
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  • From thelovelylela on August 18, 2009
    Great start to your story. Just a note, in HP Ginny's real name is Ginevra, not Virginia, in case you want to make it HP compliant. But if you haven't read all the books (not knowing her name and all), this is a good start! ~Tem
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  • From boicrazygirl15 on August 18, 2009
    oh i love the beginning to this story! Makes for a great one really. Not some plotless dramione porn. Not that none of us mind it when it comes up a couple times in stories :P lol

    Keep up the great work.. seriously :D

    update update :]:]
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  • From mhaj78 on August 17, 2009
    i like it!!! hope you'll keep it up.
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  • From nonentity on August 17, 2009
    You might want to leave the DNA out of the explanations, even if it does help characterize Hermione. It's not actually explained enough for the explanation to make any sense--not being mated properly should be sufficient. Also, if the girls are not actually being married off, but just being aggressively pushed into pairings, I think they wouldn't acquire new last names. btw, squeeds -->> squibs Most schools wouldn't allow sex on their grounds, so the rooming situations should be interesting.
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  • From HarryGinny4eva on August 17, 2009
    Well, you got me interested. lol I think you already know you've got a winner here and simply MUST update again. :-) Sooner than later, please? I look forward seeing how these pairings fare. Thanks! HG4eva
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  • From alm1067 on August 17, 2009
    I like, I really like it. Please keep up the good work.
    Thanks
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  • From on August 17, 2009
    This story has Gryffindorclutz written all over it. It has delicious potential written all over it. More so like another twist to the MLC, which has long since been scarred.
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  • From redneckpassion on August 17, 2009
    I SO wanna see where this ends up. Can't wait. :)
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  • From lemonade8 on August 17, 2009
    Well, fun premise, like your writing. I am a bit confused, though. Dumbledore didn't really spell out what was going to happen to these
    'pairs'. Are they essentially married? Is this more of a 'getting to know you' stage? In what way do they have to be together? Do they have apartments in Hogwarts or are they just in regular dorms? And once that is established, what are the penalties for dating someone who was not chosen by the pairing hat? What are the options if someone chooses to quit school and rebel? Are they being forced to reproduce during their school days? So many questions... will love to find out how you develop this.
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  • From badalyce on August 17, 2009
    excellent story. i am waiting for the next chapter
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  • From SilverLion on August 17, 2009
    There's several spelling errors, but it's an intriguing start. You've piqued my interest. I'll stick around for the moment, but I hope you can keep me interested. BTW, it's 'squib' not 'squeed'.
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 17, 2009
    this is really a nice twist. i can just see where this is going..i hope to be laughing my butt off throughout this story.please post more soon. great story.
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