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Reviews for Flight of the Phoenix

By : Phantomhive
  • From dgraymansorrowinvoked on June 12, 2011
    um just wanted to point out that you have a lot of mistaken words. for instance in this sentence "coating the back of Harry's throat before trickling down his sarcophagus" you used the word sarcophagus, which is actually a type of coffin that was used by the ancient egyptians to burry their dead kigs and nobility (as well as anyone rich enough to pay for it), but i think you were going for esophogus which is another word for your throat. anyway, i have only read the first chapter so far~ i was a bit unsure of if i would like it or not, cuz i dont normally read fics for this pairing, but it wasnt bad. i am definitaly planing on reading more^.^
    anyway, if u want to reply, my email address is dgraymansorrowinvoked@gmail.com

    (haha, one of the two words i had to type to post this was 'Granger')
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  • From racheal1987 on April 19, 2011
    I really like this story and I can't wait for the next chapter. I was wondering if you could email me when you update, pleeeeaaaasssseeee. I don't know if this review thing shows my email address so I'll leave it here. It is flaming_moondagger19872016@yahoo.com. I know it's long but I don't have to worry about someone else having one like it.
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  • From killerkitty on April 15, 2011
    This is a hot story!! Can't wait to read more. Loved the ending of chap10. What in the world is Fawkes doing?? Obviously Dumbledore's work, but how MEAN!! Poor Hagrid and Snape are virgins and want to get the rocks off... I don't see how Hagrid becoming full giant can affect his alliegance to the light?? Dudley doesn't seem to be having problems, although they will get possesive of their mates and more aggressive, I don't see the harm in loosing their virginity to one another... And Harry is surely a cum whore lols!!I love everything about this story (especially the Dursley's ignorance of Dudley!! Mega sad, but believable.)

    Keep writting!!
    Sarah xx
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 14, 2011
    I have always liked this story and was real happy that you updated. please update soon again
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  • From thrnbrooke on March 26, 2011
    soooo need chapter 11!!!!!! why is dumbles keeping them apart?
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  • From hellangelhellina on March 18, 2011
    what the hell! they've been together for 20 years and he wont let hi have sex! no wonder the giants wont go to the light, they'll all die a virgin. *sigh* dumbledore is a pain. harry should be the leader. he'd be fair. can't wait to read more.
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  • From Jan on March 17, 2011
    For some reason I feel like killing Dumbledork! I mean how dare he say when and where Hagrid gets to lose his virginity! Oh I hope something painful happens to Dumbledork.

    Please update chapter 11 soon ^_^

    Jan
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 15, 2011
    i am really intrigued by this story i love some of the ideas you have in here, i can't wait to read more :)
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  • From jujukitty on March 14, 2011
    lmao you are so evil. poor sev and hagrid...of course, poor harry for watching, though that's his own fault lol. keep up the good work, can't wait for more
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  • From bloodshound on March 14, 2011
    well, if that ain't just a kick in the balls. what a rude interruption.
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  • From ChantalMarchon on February 14, 2011
    I am totally loving this story. It is fun and well thought out.There are a lot of misspelled words. so print out a hard copy to proofread, it will often make mistakes easier to spot.
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  • From jujukitty on February 14, 2011
    sev and hagrid together, that's gonna be interesting lol cute story, can't wait to see where you go with it
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  • From Rainbow12004 on February 14, 2011
    i love it
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  • From hellangelhellina on January 11, 2011
    I read your new story erlier and decide that I wanted to see what else you wrote and I am glad I did. This is a great story. I can not wait till you come back to it.
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  • From firebolt86 on December 18, 2010
    cant wait for more!!!oreo.fanfiction@live.com
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