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Reviews for Back to Life

By : MariaTeresaQuintanar
  • From winter748 on August 26, 2009
    I'm with Wolfsoul. Vast improvement in chapter 4. The first 3 chapters came across as more of a brief sketch of how your story would go. I would like to see you go back and flesh it out more and fill in the blanks. You have potential and a very interesting story.
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  • From AriaDragoncrest on August 26, 2009
    4. Great chapter. I love that you had Albus as a suprise.

    Rise up by woodstock?
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  • From AriaDragoncrest on August 26, 2009
    ch 3: Maybe elmer forgot the "ly good" part. Its a great story.
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  • From Darkwolf01 on August 26, 2009
    OK, vast improvement on the fourth chapter. It's strange. It's like an adult stepped in and took over the story. The first three chapters are vague and very non-descriptive but this chapter is much better. Well done for getting a bit serious on making the story more readable and nice description and dialogue. Still a little sketchy on description of the places though. I know she was in front of the Wizengamot (watch your spelling of place names, Wizengamot not Wizmogot)but I'd have loven to see a bit more on atmosphere or just generalised description of what everything looked like. A brief example; if Kingsley is the head of the Wizengamot, then I'm nearly sure he'd be high up in his seat like Fudge was, which would make it very hard for Hermione to look at him eye to eye. But all 'round improvement, so well done.

    Wolf
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  • From ANON - ladychrisitnad on August 26, 2009
    I am really enjoying the story so far. Don't listen to anyone who tries to flame you. I do think you could put in more of the inner thoughts and feelings of the characters, but all in all, you are doing a great job! Update soon
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  • From ANON - VoraciousReader on August 26, 2009
    Why bluff when you can set the whole damn deck of cards on fire? For once I'm actually glad to see Albus show up for a Wizengamot meeting!Nice one, hon.
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  • From Tenar10r on August 26, 2009
    "is it over" by TOTO ?
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  • From dannilawless on August 26, 2009
    Ooh linkin park in the end. Great chappie. Can't wait for more!
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  • From katiekrm on August 26, 2009
    Linkin Park's One Thing! I love that song. I was in a really bad relationship when that song came out so it was like the theme to my life at the time. I am so happy you brought back Fred, too! Not that I don't love Severus and Remus, too, and yeah, Albus. But how can Feorge be without Gred? I do wonder what JK Rowling envisioned happening to the Malfoys after the war. Obviously, Draco is eventually free, if not free the whole time. I seriously hope she does that annex. In the meantime, I will read your take on it. :-)
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  • From sirimionefan85 on August 26, 2009
    Great story so far! She gets Remus and Snape back. Lucky. Why do Ginny and Hermione hate each other so much? What happened? They certainly never hated each other in the books. More details about that as well as how people reacted to seeing dead people would be nice. You could've had such fun with that scene of seeing the dead again. Also why no Sirius? I do love him. And Regulus too, since he did try to do what he thought was right even though it killed him.
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  • From Serenablack9000 on August 26, 2009
    Love your story. don't listen to them people who are rude and of course don't give a damn about someones feelings. (fyi READ THE STORY AGAIN if u don't get it or come back another day and read it, just giving a little advise hehe :P) not to sure what the song is but i would love to know the answer. Keep up the good work.
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  • From beerwench1313 on August 25, 2009
    I am enjoying this story, but I just can't wrap my mind around this particular Ginny. Oftentimes, an author makes her irrational if it will end up as a HP/HG story, as a way of getting rid of her, but as this is a HG/SS story, there does not seem to be much reason for her extreme irrationality. I wonder if there is some greater reason for her actions, or if you have just written her as a juvenile twit. Looking forward to see how she develops, although if she is just going to be annoying everyone the whole time, that could get tiring quickly.

    The song is Linkin Park's "In the End". Love them and am looking forward to more!
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  • From lilashannah on August 25, 2009
    I love the story so far,and glad your back.sorry I'm so tired that I can't think of the song.Good ol'Hermione out to save the world one wizard at a time.lol.
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  • From ANON - CuddeStrike on August 25, 2009
    You know what makes me happy? Reading till the end of the page and then discovering there's another chapter =)
    I'm utterly intrigued, although Snape (personally) appears a little too... 'nice' / 'touchy feely' with Hermione.
    However, that could be due to him coming back from the dead.. but I have no idea *shrugs*
    Continue! It is always a wonderful joy to come across a story that is appealing in both the construction of the piece and plotline.

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  • From ANON - Anon on August 25, 2009
    let me enlighten you all...first of all it clearly states she is out of the country, second gaya is the name the old lady asked to be called..seeing is she is known by about 50 names, so it is possible for dumbledork not to know her. third she also said those whom it was not time to go would come back..give it a rest all ready.. this is a very good story and from a point not yet charted.. so you go and reread this lovely story..

    great story by the way ,,love it so far..
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