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Reviews for Back to Life

By : MariaTeresaQuintanar
  • From katiekrm on August 29, 2009
    Four little reviews just to get me alone? What is in place of reviews? Roofies? "Four little roofies just to get me alone. Why didn't you just ask? I'm horny and always have a bone." I should be a song writer. ;-)

    I can't believe Severus said Lilly's name! How is he going to dig himself out of that hole? I loved the massage part, though. Oh, to pass out and wake up naked in a studly man's bed getting a massage. If only.

    When I was reading the Greyback part, I thought what? Is Mariteri insane? She's going to have Hermione free even him? Has she become one of those author's who is so out of touch with reality and what is believable? But then I read on. Sorry I doubted you for a few seconds there.
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  • From ANON - ashmo21 on August 29, 2009
    Holy CRAP!!!! You can't just leave it there. Please update soon. I'm on pins and needles....
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  • From ANON - PnkCountess on August 29, 2009
    Ohhh.... I love cliffies. The plot is thickening nicely. Can't wait for the next chapter. Keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - VoraciousReader on August 28, 2009
    Lemon with artificial flavoring! Oh, poor Hermione, and Severus just made a major blunder. She has my sympathies about the aching back, though. I think I just figured out why this story is so different from all your others: the entire viewpoint is completely internal. The externals are not essential, so (consciously or not) they are largely excluded. It gives it a very unusual flavor, unusually intimate.
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  • From ANON - makaem on August 28, 2009
    Jeez, wrong name Snape. I'd be really ticked, bring a guy back from the dead and he calls out another's name. Is the song "That's not my Name " by the Ting Tings?
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  • From Sampdoria on August 28, 2009
    Good on you Hermione! Walk out the door and never look back, you deserve better than this! If that idiot can't see a good thing when he has it, he deserves to loose it. There is no way to salvage this situation, he is doomed if he was awake, and just as doomed if he claims to have been dreaming, the insult of calling Hermione Lily can never be undone. Jackass, just when I had started to hum happily due to their wonderful progress, I could kick him where it hurt the most!!!!
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  • From ANON - little, old me on August 28, 2009
    That's not my name, the tingtings
    this is a really great story, but evil cliffhanger are just so...evil ;-)
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  • From ANON - Mia on August 28, 2009
    This story is fantastic. I can see why someone might be upset off the bat if they are cannon nazi-ish, as Hermione automatically gravitates as behaves very comfortable around someone with whom she has no previous intimate relationship. Thay may also have thought that you came off particularly harsh in regards to Ginny. But that's just tough tonails. They can go suck an egg as far as I'm concerned. It feels comfortable and beautiful to me. The negative review was rather childish, I agree.

    I love their interaction. I love that he seems to gravitate just as much to her. I love your horrible little cliffhangers and your content and wording is just splendid to behold. I'm not particularly fond of the karaoke review a thon, but it's easily ignored. And I'm sure that many people who wouldn't normally review do do because you play with us. You deserve every single positive review you may garner. But you deserve them on merit and skill alone. IMO. You are gorgeous. Thank you for sharing your graceful talent.

    ~Mia
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  • From ANON - ladychrisitnad on August 28, 2009
    You are an evil woman for the cliffie...especially that kind! Oh, I can't wait to find out Severus's reaction to his being a jerk.
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  • From Sampdoria on August 28, 2009
    Brilliant, I am so glad Hermione managed to get her plans through; Children shouldn't be punished for their fathers sins, and though there are probably lots of those who deserves to spend the rest of their life in Azkaban, the Ministry would probably do a lot more good for their future by saving and giving redemption to those who deserves a seccond chance and can contribute in a good way to the wizarding worlds future. Having Lucius looking for dark items was a brilliant move, who can do the job better than one who knows the dark art as well as Lucius? Just as importantly; Lucius have a motivation in Narcissa and Draco to do a good job, he has someone to loose.
    I am very much looking forward to read more!!!
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  • From lilashannah on August 27, 2009
    i missed a few day and you had tons of reading for me. Thank you.Love the story so far. how's Fred taking being alive again?Hermione is Draco's new best friend..lol.
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  • From ANON - Nemesis on August 27, 2009
    Brand New Day by Ryan Star.

    I'm so excited about this fic!!!
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  • From beerwench1313 on August 27, 2009
    I am a little confused about the house elf assistance idea. A family's house elves inherently guard a family's secrets, such as the location of dark artifacts. Most of them abhor the idea of being paid so this would not make them any more likely to spill secrets to outsiders. Any house elf that is not bonded to the family, but is an odd sort, like Dobby, who wants payment, would not know about other elves' family secrets. Elves in general cannot find the artifacts; it is because they belong to a family, that they are privy to the location of the items. Even when Dobby was angry at his own treatment by the Malfoys, he still could not tell others their secrets. If he, who was unique in wanting freedom from bad masters still could not go against his code of servitude, how would other elves (even if they are also in bad family situations) be able to reveal the locations of the artifacts?

    Aside from that one issue, I like where this story is going. I can see the Ministry, although complying with Hermione's ideas, making her run from opposite ends of the building for the different trials, just to get back at her for putting them in their places. I look forward to more soon!
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  • From ANON - VoraciousReader on August 27, 2009
    There's a line from David Eddings--'Some are doers of deeds and some are doers of tasks. A deed once done is done forever but a task returns every day.' or something like that, anyway. Harry is a deed-doer, he kills the badguy and gets on with his life. Hermione is a doer of tasks, and does them well and with verve. She is brave, but should have been in Slytherin since she will allow nothing to stop her getting her goals, and right now she wants to rebuild the wizarding world. She WILL get her way, come hell, high water or anything in between. I love this version of Hermione. As for the reviews by Wolf, she/he does have a point in that there is very little description in your stories and a lack of physical detail, but if that's what you want, I don't have a problem with it. Minimalism has never bothered me much (check out my own writing, I tend to leave a lot of the settings to the reader's imagination)and as long as it's a conscious choice, go with it. Awaiting more!
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  • From ANON - makaem on August 27, 2009
    I like the feel to this story. I love Dumbledore's grand entrance in the previous chapter. And I like the idea that the wizarding world might have a shot at moving on, eventually. Was the song from the opening of "Lie to Me"? Ryan Star sings it, but I can't remember the title and I'm too lazy to google it.
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