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Reviews for Magic

By : starstruck86
  • From ANON - SeverinKamana on March 16, 2012
    This is perfect right were you left it. I feel like for a story to be enjoyable you have to feel it in your very heart. I cried, I laughed, I smiled and I was even a little wistful at times. You did a wonderful job.
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  • From talley on August 29, 2009
    What a wonderful story arc. The babies and that orb were great thoughts and it was executed so I believed it. Funny they sure got into the habit of talking to them. Loved how they evolved and took on each parent's traits. Liked that still nothing is even keel with them or the families and friends but nothing that can't be solved or at least isn't irrepairable. Poor Ron, I'm still wondering about those ribs of his. And you never touched on why he was so tired and losing weight or the cold thing, but perhaps you will later. *is praying you will come back to this pair*

    I hate that I just finished this and my hubby is impatient for me. So I will say this. I love you work and enjoyed this so so so much.
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  • From ANON - Jaino on August 27, 2009
    Thank you so much! My jaw dropped when I saw my name, lol. I really love all your stories and this one is just so sweet. I think you did an amazing job portraying the babies
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  • From VenusOfHeaven on August 26, 2009
    First of all, I love this one, too. (I'm a bit repetitive, don't mind me)

    All future parents freak out when thir children are about to be born, I believe. I think you did a most excellent job depicting their stress before this situation - no one sane would be all calm and self-assured. They're going to be your children! How can you be sure you0d do well by them? Severus, specially, would go completely crazy, as I'm sure he would have read about all the things that could go wrong. Enough to send him, a self-admitted paranoid, into hysterics.

    Also, Ron's mental pregnancy - yay for him for making Severus wake up at three in the morning for a cheeseburguer, and survivint to tell the tale.

    The birth is an awesome scene, and I adore the triplets. Also, Severus's concern about not being a good enough father, and their reluctance at leaving the children alone (nevermind Charlie).

    And finally, most little children like to pull on hair, specially if it's long. I know by personal experience. My own hair is long (as in, mid-gluteus long, but that's only because it grows insanely quickly and not even three years ago it was shorter than shoulder length), and small children are fascinated. Pulling hair is only the beginning. And we do not get handy wands to make gooey stuff disappear - you can't imagine my dread when a child has eaten ice-cream.

    And I wouldn't mind a fic settled on 'that dreaded time in which we send our little babies far, far away'. Nope, wouldn't mind.

    Davinci

    PS: Severus's introduction to the death eater world made me sniff for him. He really didn't know where we was getting into, not fully.
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  • From ANON - abbi cee on August 25, 2009
    Well I am, of course, way behind in my reading of this lovely series, but I've been busy catching up now that I have some time to myself. I love watching Ron and Severus evolve in their relationship and I think one of the things I like most is that neither one is exclusively top or bottom. Mind you, I have a real kink for bottom Snape, but I'm finding that I really enjoy them being more equal in the sex. And now they have kids. I love it, though I wasn't sure I would despite my love of mpreg. I feel a bit terrible in admitting that Elliot is my favorite, but they're all cute. I say go ahead and do the story of the kids going to school if you want. While I wasn't that fond of JKR's epilogue I think it was becasue it just left everything too neatly packaged up. Obviously Harry was going to marry Ginny, Ron marries Hermione, making them all one big intertwined family, they lead the Wizarding World into a newer and brighter age and everything's happy happy joy joy in the land of Oz. Or not. But don't get me started. There were parts of the epilogue I liked, it was just the predictableness of it gave it a very 2D feel. Okay. I'm stopping now. Really.
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  • From ANON - Sheree on August 24, 2009
    Triplets - OMG! And I wanted twins LOL

    A wonderful read as usual - I really like that Severus finally let go of his past a little bit - so give himself some closure before moving into the new future w/ the kids - very nice indeed.

    I may be one of the few readers who enjoyed the final chapter of DH - so I would look forward to reading another story that would have R & S doing a little remembering about the first eleven years of the triplets lives and a little dreaming about their future as well.

    P.S. I think you got the kids just right!
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