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By : starstruck86
  • From VenusOfHeaven on September 01, 2009
    Bridgette came as a surprise. Like Ron, I was expecting a male, for some obscure reason of my subsconcious. Now, I liked her, with her no-nonsense attitude and her 'perchant for older men', which makes me smile, as she is bound to be considerably older than Severus, at the very least (and the fact that he was 'the one who got away' made me laugh). I had never thought about the reasons of the too much deep bond Ron and Severus share, but it all blends seamlessly into the story. Ron is insecure, as I have pointed out, and he seems to thrive on the fact that Severus wants him, and cannot seem to get enough of him.

    Lol at Ron's thinking that the snowman needs a wife so that he won't be alone.

    The scene in Severus's bed - no words, my mouth is still dry from reading it, starting from Severus's show and ending in the decadent sheets that Severus changed especially for Ron. Seriously, Severus's show? That was enough to make me go to brainmelt mode. Then, you followed on it. I might have to ask you someday where do you get all this talent for writing smut. Must be from the same place where you get the interesting plots and the amazing characterizations.

    >>I am also having issues with Severus
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  • From ANON - kai on September 01, 2009
    hehehehehehe....i'm happy! go you with those awesome spells that Sev used on Ron. XDD
    Also, you're right, I think you've been a little easy on them. It's only been problems between the two of them. Someone in the school needs to find out!! Muhahahahahaha....
    also, something needs to be done with Hermione and Ron's family.

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  • From CruelHero on September 01, 2009
    You know I don't normally like Snape/Ron but I was thinking it was about time for a change - and why not, I'm flexible? I was disappointed to see so little of this paring, and lets face it, half of these stories wouldn't be worth the read anyway. That's incredibly rude of me, but that's just the way it is, and I'm not dis-including my own stories from that statement. I was glad to find this one of yours among the 14 others. I was hoping to find something that I could stand to read past the first half of a chapter and you did not disappoint. Having Snape as a vampire was a wonder surprise [even if we all knew before hand from your A/Ns and things (are you shocked that someone actually reads those things? xD but I really do). Anyway, I just wanted to tell you that I'm enjoying this one immensely and I will be checking back for those further chapters. You said you feel unsure about the way things are going but don't. I think its just right and I agree that Snape wouldn't be anything but a dominate person. Please keep up the good work. I'll be cheering for you even if you can't hear it. ^-^
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  • From ANON - Sheree on September 01, 2009
    I don't think they've had it too easy but there has been no outside intrusion or interference at all - This togetherness has to be tested by both those who know Severus is a vampire and those who don't.

    It's time to turn it up a notch - I know there is supposed to be a physical bond but it's time to see how far it will stretch before one or both of them snaps.

    teehee
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  • From ANON - zanzi on September 01, 2009
    I have to say that normally Ron is my least favourite character in fanfic (I'm more of a SSHG or SSRL girl) but I just love what you've done with this story and with your others. I admit to loving a dominate Severus, so personally I'd like to see it ratcheted up a few notches--more snarly snark is always a good thing! Anyway, well done, and look forward to the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - kai on September 01, 2009
    it was written for me, awww you shouldn't have, i love you even more now. ^_^ yes for rimming. XDD
    i loved that their working thru their things now. i love ron in this. ^_^ he's to adorable.
    i actually like that their going to be spending some time apart, it'll show how much theymean to each other more, then. also Severus giving Ron his nightshirt, so sweet. i loved that part. i can't wait for the rest.
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  • From talley on September 01, 2009
    First to answer:-Talley
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  • From VenusOfHeaven on August 31, 2009
    Severus's conscience has loosened a bit the hold over his guilt, and that's a good thing, as he would have driven himself half-mad with it if it had continued, especially considering how their relation is deepening. By the way, just after Ron comments on how good it would be if Severus could duplicate himself, and Severus says 'yet'... Is that a big hint? Because, as you know, I have an hypeactive imagination, and the images I am coming up with are very interesting, to say the least.

    And I love that neither of the two can steop thinking about the other for five minutes. No matter what they are doing, they are remembering, or fantasizing.

    On the other hand, I am very glad that Ron and Harry have patched things up. They have gone through so much together, it would be a shame to let the friendship cool.

    Severus's visit to Paris, however, is going to mark another big point in their relationship. First of all, they are not going to see each other, and although it has happened before, it wasn't because they were far away from each other, but for personal decision. Also, Severus is going to be around other vampires, which I, particularly, am waiting for, because we, till this moment, have no idea of who turned Severus, or if he is the same friend he is going to see.

    And Severus giving Ron his t-shirt was so damned adorable (I'm sure Severus will deny that he is anything resembling 'adorable', but the gesture certainly was). And Ron knowing that Severus could (and did) cry because of the guilt over havng caused him pain was unexpected.

    Davinci
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 31, 2009
    I'm glad Ron & Harry are back together. Just because something is happening w/ Ron doesn't mean he can turn his back on his friends.
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  • From ANON - Sheree on August 31, 2009
    'Lost himself' - there is not doubt he has done that but I hope he doesn't truly.

    And the "Yet." after Ron's thought of two mouths - did I read that wrong or do you have something more up your sleeve?

    Again, I bow to your imagination and hope it never stops.
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  • From talley on August 31, 2009
    Now I have to wait for more? Glad you decided and had the mind to think out more of this one-shot. I truly am marvelling at how different these two are in this versus the other universe yet stayed true to who they are internally. I hope you may explain the lore that Severus was referencing cause I was alittle confused. Fire imp? Nice creation. Can't wait for more and seeing how you move this along. Now I truly have something to look forward to.
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  • From ANON - Sheree on August 30, 2009
    Finally got here and **Phew so worth the wait - I want to beat them both with a wet noodle - Ron for provoking him to such lengths (fool) and Severus for losing control - but in the same sense they both didn't know what they were getting into either - there is a connection here that goes beyond vampirism (word?), sex or addiction.

    I'm wondering what kind of crafty thing you have thought up for us.

    Magnificant as usual - and now we wait....
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  • From abbicee on August 30, 2009
    Hmm, drat. Somehow I logged in with an old address and I can't figure out how to get in to change it. I can't even figure out how to log out. Oh well. Review time. I'm wondering just who the submissive is here, because it sure doesn't seem to be Ron. Where does Snape go to meet other vampires? Is there like a club where they hang out and tell fangy stories over a pint or two? ;-) Someone had to teach Snape how to go on with his new life and I'll bet there are still some things he doesn't know. After all three years is a fairly short time in a vampire's life. Anyway I love how human Snape still is despite his non-human condition. And how tenacious Ron is.
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  • From VenusOfHeaven on August 30, 2009
    *sits back stunned and slack-jawed*

    I am trying to restart higher brain functions, but they seem to be in mass failure at the moment.

    Severus has finally recognized that the pull towards Ron isn
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  • From talley on August 30, 2009
    Oh my freakin holy hell! Vampire story!!!! Love stories about vampires but since I rarely read anything unless Ron is a main character, I've read very few of these. So thank you. Then add in Snape and having these two bickering each other and having hot sex is just tooooooo much. I love it. And you're writing as you post? Wow. Seriously I may become a stalker of yours. Where ever you post I'll be there reading. *dare I say even if Ron isn't in it?*
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