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Reviews for Uncoffined

By : LadyofClunn
  • From swissmiss on February 18, 2010
    SO SO SO GOOD!!! i really really loved it, you have a LOT of writing talent. AND it's original! fantastic! will you be writing another one? =)
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  • From WesleyY7 on February 18, 2010
    Oh, this was wonderful! That's all I can say. I'm going to be absurdly tired for work tomorrow, but it was all worth it. :)
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  • From WesleyY7 on February 18, 2010
    Stopping to review after chapter 9. Wow. I completely forgot about the Resistance, but I like how Hermione is subtly sending messages to Arthur. The scene in Diagon Alley was awesome with Draco letting the poor girl go and then Hermione getting spit on by someone she was on the same side as. I can't believe Blaise talked Draco into sharing, and boy was that scene hot! Which lead to this totally awesome line:
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  • From WesleyY7 on February 18, 2010
    I'm only up to chapter 4, but I had to stop and tell you I am hooked! I've read countless Voldermort wins stories, and I really think you've created a unique world here. I am totally hooked. I'm a huge dub-con fan, but was really pleased you glossed over their first coupling because Hermione was in seemed so detached from the whole thing. The ghetto of the Warren is a bleak picture for those who have survived and my heart breaks for Hermione and the Weasleys. When George didn't come back and Ginny getting sick, I worried when Molly said she was just going to lie down. I'm glad she found the will to keep going. And I'm happy that Ginny is on the mend. I miss some of Hermione's spirit, but it makes sense as she's ben through so much and is probably shell shocked and in survival mode. I'm pleased Draco isn't totally evil here (odd thing to say since he has murdered). I've always seen him as a lonely character at times, no one getting close to him save his parents, so it's no surprise he's not connecting with anyone here. I'm off to read more.
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  • From mrequecky on February 17, 2010
    Wow, I somehow missed a few of the updates, but so good to finally read more! I love the ending a lot! Sooooo good!
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  • From nitesfool on February 16, 2010
    yes yes... i did like this chapter... i esp liked that draco gave her the bellpeppers.... hnmmmm don't tell me if u are going to or not... but it might be interesting to see what will happen with finished portraits of lucius and narcissa find out that draco not only had a kid, but it's a half blood....hnmmm.... just a thought
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  • From ANON - SarahWhtiman on February 15, 2010
    YAY YAY YAY YAY YAY YAY YAY!!!! I
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  • From ANON - Ris on February 15, 2010
    I've been following your story since its first chapter. Every chapter was wonderful and beyond beautiful. I anxiously await the sequel! You write so professionally, it just blows my mind how much talent you have. Good luck and may those creative juices keep flowing!
    -Ris
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  • From lemonade8 on February 15, 2010
    Great ending. Leaves me wanting more. I feel for Draco and Hermione. Two years is hard. At least there is hope for them.
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 14, 2010
    Beautifully wrapped up with a loving bow. Well done! This was a pleasure to read from start to finish and I look forward to reading more of your stories. :)
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  • From warangel820 on February 14, 2010
    That was a wonderful ending to a great story.
    You conclude this in such a simple way that works so well for how the story has gone so far. I especially liked how you ended in a way that ties in with how they met, showing that they were able to work past those bad times and have the prospect of a future. This just was perfect. I will definiatly be watching to see what else you write.
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  • From dragongirl on February 14, 2010
    Love it Love it Love it!
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  • From VeoniaBackridge on February 14, 2010
    Putting aside the fact that I did *not* want this story to end; very nice ending to a great story! Congrats on the completion of your wonderful story!
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  • From Insolence on February 14, 2010
    Complete? COMPLETE? Are you KIDDING ME?!

    How did he keep the house/fortune? Where are Lucius and Cissa? Where/how did she live while he was in Azkaban? Did the Weasleys know? What happened when Julian's background was revealed to the general public? WAS it ever revealed? *pauses to take a breath*

    If this is "complete", I'm a Hufflepuff champion. Now back to the writing desk with you! *stomps foot*
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  • From kogaluver on February 14, 2010
    I really enjoyed this story very much. It was one of my favorites. But, I have to say that I thought the ending was pretty anti-climatic. For me, it left too much still up in the air, or rather, randomly wrapped up. I don't even think "randomly" is the right word I'm looking for either. I'm sorry. I just feel a bit like, okaaaay. Maybe you could write an epilogue of how their lives continued together. Maybe even Draco making love to "Hermione" not Jeanne. I dunno. I still loves the story regardless. ^_^
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