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By : LadyofClunn
  • From chyara on January 23, 2010
    Oh my Gods! what a cliffhanger!
    I hope you are able to post again soon.

    By the end of the chapter, my heart was racing.
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  • From appleblossum24 on January 23, 2010
    yes Hermione cannot make him suffer anymore... she's a Gryffindor... and her sense of justice is too strong to keep the baby away, even if she's scared he might hate her.
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  • From appleblossum24 on January 23, 2010
    aaaahaggahahahahah!!! noooooo cliffie, evil evil evil cliffie. *pouts* WHYYYYYYYYY???! post more post more!!!
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  • From lemonade8 on January 23, 2010
    Oh, holy crap! I hope they don't kill him! He's actually one of the nicer ones.
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  • From RZZMG1111 on January 23, 2010
    Oh my... Breathlessly waiting for the next installment. Hurry!
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 23, 2010
    Sad! Sad! Sad! If only she'd waited to see what he had to say, to see if he was truly alright. I understand why she didn't, why she felt she couldn't but still. Oh that was heart wrenching (again). And I see he's decided to change sides, through his lot in with the Resistence - I wonder what they are going to do with him? Or to him as the case may be? Very intriguing, I can't wait to see what's next? I hope it's not too long before Draco knows he's going to be a father. Loved it!!!!!!
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  • From mirrorofrapture on January 23, 2010
    This turn of events kind of caught me off guard, but I really like where the story is going. Once again, very nice job with everything. I hope that you update this soon because I'm already itching to read more!
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  • From HighViscosity on January 23, 2010
    Okay, the Malfoy name being so desperate to continue that it coerced these two poor battered souls to make a baby in the middle of a war? That is BADASS and hilarious!

    I do wish things had gone differently... Hermione seems to have lost quite a bit of her Gryffindor courage if she's just going to keep running off on this man she maybe loves. I also feel like no matter what she feels for Malfoy, she'd know that he deserves to die.

    Draco losing everything and still acting like lord of the manor was a beautiful image. Thanks for that. Looking forward to more!
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  • From warangel820 on January 23, 2010
    That was a huge cliff hanger! The chapter was great, I can't wait until you update. I just have to know what happens to Draco.
    Are you ever going to have him find out that Hermione is Jeanne?
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  • From Insolence on January 23, 2010
    Damn, you'll make me squeal like a fangirl yet!

    Things are getting (even more) complicated, I see. Now, I do appreciate the grand gesture at the end, but... WHAT KIND OF IDIOT LOWERS THE FAMILY WARDS BEFORE REFLECTING ON THE FACT THAT THEY WERE BREACHED BY AN OUTSIDER?! I REALLY hope the kid gets mommy's brains, because daddy is plainly nothing if not a besotted fool. *groans in frustration*

    I LOVED it, kid. LOL






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  • From swissmiss on January 21, 2010
    YAY! they're together again!
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  • From ANON - hotbabe on January 20, 2010
    Im dissapointed with Draco. I thought he really love Hermione. If he does he wouldnt share her with his friend. And he even got the nerve to tell her that she means more to him than just the money. He treated her like a common whore. On the other hand i am very proud of Hermione her. She has dignity and courage. I applaude her for leaving him. She made the right decision. Now i want to see how Draco will make up to her.

    Great writing! As you can see im very much affected with your story.
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  • From mirrorofrapture on January 19, 2010
    I don't often feel compelled to review or rate stories anymore, and to be honest, I've passed this one a few times. I now realize how big of a mistake I've made. I do not really regret reading all that you have posted and leaving my homework and studying undone. Maybe there is a twinge of annoyance with myself for leaving it so, but I am for the most part left intrigued by your story. Your writing is very good and the plot is coming along nicely. This type of story is hard to do without being "hokey" about it. You have made me pity Malfoy's character, and you impressed upon the readers the complexity of the situations that the characters find themselves in. I really like that there is enough description and imagery to give me the idea of how things appear without being bogged down by so many words that I am not free to imagine certain things for myself. I suppose that I could have said all of this in far fewer words... but... EXCELLENT WORK!
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 17, 2010
    Yay for making Blaise a relatively 'good guy' although I'm sure I would have enjoyed this story just the same even if he hadn't said and done what he did. :) I'm glad Draco has an ally in this mess. And Hermione, I'm sure the witches would have ripped her to shreds the moment she was returned to the Warren so it's lucky she found some measure of protection rather quickly. I understand why they would have thought she might have betrayed them though. And at what cost - she left Draco behind too, she's done her duty in passing on the news of the planned attacks (once again love how the 'men' thought so little of her that they were not careful what they said in front of her) but at such a price. Still, it's the catylist they need. Loved the knight in shining armour bit too as he arrived just in time to 'sweep her off her feet' and save the day. Well done!!!! Can't wait to see what's next. :)

    And you're welcome for the review, it was a pleasure to read and comment. :)
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  • From ANON - Michelle on January 17, 2010
    The story is going swimmingly ;) I can't wait to see what happens next!
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