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By : LadyofClunn
  • From ANON - coco on January 17, 2010
    The turns this story has taken are amazing. Now we see that Hermione has been just as affected by the relationship as Draco has been. I hope that Draco makes something better out of this second chance with Hermione. I want to also say that you write about the rising unrest from the masses very beautifully!
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  • From ANON - chocolatedoodle on January 15, 2010
    Oh wow. That broke my heart and made my Saturday a good, almost-weepy Saturday. In the last scene though, I was almost afraid Hermione was rescued by Theo, rather than Draco.
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  • From HighViscosity on January 15, 2010
    You are not talking to cyberspace, promise!

    Good job with Hermione keeping a detailed list of all planned raids, very her. And how you made it clear Draco's doing a crap job with things, how his thoughts are so distracted.

    I didn't look over past stuff to check, but I feel like the end of this most recent chapter is the only time you've ever overlapped POVs, and it felt a little weird because of that (it could just be my bad memory)...

    Exciting to find out who's alive or dead still. I do wish we could have seen a bit more with the Weasleys, but I understand you want to keep the plot moving.
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  • From UnseenLibrarian on January 15, 2010
    Great chapter. I love the glimpses of the inner turmoil both Hermione and Draco are dealing with as a result of her leaving. Draco is obviously disgusted with himself for going along with the idea. I feel he's redeemed himself, at least to an extent, with the rescue. Well done. I love this story!
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  • From Kayrox133 on January 15, 2010
    I was so thrilled to go to AFF tonight and see your story. The earring scene was great. I loved the way "Jeanne" handled herself with dignity and showed the Slytherin Death Eaters they were low class sods for all their pureblood snootiness. Good for her to sticking to her morals and getting out of the situation with Draco. As always for me, I want the good side to win but shall wait to see how it goes, then I wonder what will happen to the High Reeve who stepped over his dead mother's body? BTW, I liked that extra bit to show that he was taking advantage of the situation, and saving his own skin. I would also love to see someone blast Theo. Oh and was it Markus Flint who made the comment about the conversation boring a woman? What a dork! I can think of an extra special curse affecting someone's ability to perform sexually. "Oh, poor Markus. Are my actions boring you?" after hours of fruitless attempts by a Knockturn Alley pureblood whore. Mu ha ha ha Anyway, I look forward to the next chapter. :)
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  • From dragongirl on January 15, 2010
    lOVE THE DRAMA AND THE LOVE HE GOT FOR HER! LOVE IT!
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  • From Insolence on January 15, 2010
    *offers cookies as reimbursement for the lack of reviews* ^_~

    I'm still reading. You're still making me happy with every new chapter. And I still intend to make a hard copy once you're done...
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  • From ANON - Smurphy on January 15, 2010
    Wow what a great couple of chaps and oh so powerful I am glad that she left Draco not that I want them apart just that he needs to see what his actions do to others and that he does not always gets what he wants I wonder what will happen now I am so in love with the way you wrote Draco thigh he has sooo many layers
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  • From RZZMG1111 on January 15, 2010
    So Blaise isn't in a game with Theo to take Draco down a notch, as I incorrectly assumed. Interesting. I'm very interested in knowing where this is going to go. Please update again soon!
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  • From ANON - Marie on January 15, 2010
    Really enjoying your story, thank you for writting so well and for updating so quickly, I look forward to the next chapter.
    -Marie
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  • From margaritama on January 15, 2010
    OMG - that was so bloody brilliant...wonderful. I'm aching...and when shall she reveal herself to him?


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  • From ANON - Anon on January 12, 2010
    Things I like about this story - the quirk of having all the "UN-" titles. I love a gimmick. Seeing the true effects of a war raging that turns a society up on it's head. Knowing the heartbreak of losing loved ones to the war and its ravaged effects. The way women/witches are treated in a society that is obviously male dominated and thinks of them as worthless creatures. They are so stupid! Knowing that Draco has a heart despite his so-called allegiance to the Dark Lord and the fact that he's smart enough to start questioning what he has done, what he ahs become, what he is now accountable for and the fact that even if he can't see it yet, he has a chance to redeem himself. At least, I hope he does. :) Waiting to see whether Theo and Blaise will betray Draco and if they're stupid enough to hurt Hermione/Jeanne to do it. And finally (for the time being) thinking how damn hot that scene was with Draco and Blaise together even though it hurt her so much afterward. But perhaps there was a little something extra in Draco's drink that night???? Either way, I thought it was very sexily done and Blaise was gentle with her, he didn't have to be and I'm glad he respected her (in a way). perhaps there is hope for him too, one never knows. :)

    Things I don't like about this story - not a damn thing!!!!! Wonderfully written, thought out and expressed. Well done!!!!!
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  • From mrequecky on January 12, 2010
    Ui ui ui... Loved this chap!
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  • From nitesfool on January 10, 2010
    oh my goodness... this story is sooooo addictive. i find myself checking 2 or 3 times a day to see if u've posted another chapter!!!!
    and this chapter... oh my... i like... i definatly didn't expect Draco to share her... with Blaise non the less... and her reaction... look, the whole scene was delectable and very tastefully done. it felt natural, like u weren't tryin to push the characters in a direction other then what u had already set up for them. i especially liked the scene where Blaise had given her the gift... i liked that u went thru her train of thought and then she gave the gift to Draco and made the Pimp comment. i felt and understood her conflicting emotions reconized the instant she choose to strengthen her resolve.... either way... Great Chapter... i've already read it twice and plan on doing it again. and oh yeah... HURRY UP AND POST AGAIN ALREADY!!!
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  • From jaceni50 on January 10, 2010
    I don't have words for how mad I am with Draco. lol. I can't believe he did that! I wonder what happened in order to have that happen though. He really seemed not to want to share. Anyway, can't wait till the next chapter and again great story! :)
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