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By : LadyofClunn
  • From ANON - yanafava on January 10, 2010
    Oh this chapter just broke my heart! You put it together just right!
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  • From margaritama on January 10, 2010
    this chapter was unexpected....I truly didn't see it coming and my heart broke for Hermione yet also for Draco. He made a stupid choice and then to have it flung in her face as if she was a common tart...inexcusable. What now? What now that she wants to leave? Sigh....LOVE this story.
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  • From ANON - coco on January 10, 2010
    How disappointing that Draco gave into Blaise's suggestion! I suppose it's not entirely inappropriate given her position and the situation but if Draco wanted anything more with her this was not the way to go about it. At least this gave Hermione the chance to take two steps back and reevaluate the situation she's in and whether it is really worth it to give up her body in return for her family's well-being. And I'm glad Hermione was able to show that she still has her wits about her, during the dinner.
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  • From chyara on January 10, 2010
    Wow! Just Wow! What an emotional rollercoaster.
    I feel silly now.
    You see when your story first went up and I saw the title, my first thought was it was being written by an illiterate person.
    But today I wanted to read something new and brokedown and started your first chapter. I was hooked!
    Then I looked up the word uncoffined..lol to my shame it is an actual word...lol Literally meaning not buried in a coffin. How simple! My goodness I felt like a dweeb...

    then this last chapter, where Hermione tells Draco she wishes to leave. I can't wait for the next chapter now.
    My favorite part of this last chapter was when she gave Blaise's gift to Draco as his pimp's share. Wow!
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  • From RZZMG1111 on January 09, 2010
    An excellent chapter, filled with emotion. My own heart started pounding when Hermione placed the earrings in Draco's hand and called him a pimp. Well done. Please update soon!
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  • From ANON - lemonade on January 09, 2010
    Draco has really messed up now. I expected something like this to happen to her, her choices are few in that household and her protector is accustomed to NOT protecting. I love that she at least kept as much dignity as possible under the circumstances, and that she gave the earrings away. Does he understand that she has only ever been with him? Maybe that was his regret.
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  • From HighViscosity on January 09, 2010
    Yes, I see exactly what you were worried about, there are people looking for fluff out there... and they won't be getting it any time soon.

    This kind of thing needed to happen, because no matter what, to Draco she's still just a paid mistress. Hermione, as you made it clear, was finding it easy to forget who she was to him.

    I actually found the wording in this chapter a bit difficult to read, particularly the part with Blaise; I had to read it multiple times, because I was a bit confused as to who went with what... if you follow my meaning. Also, there was an excessive amount of passive voice, when an alternative could have been preferable.

    Anyway, I think you're doing really well with this, and I look forward to reading more (Maybe we'll get to see how the Weasleys are doing now, that'd be cool)!
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  • From dragongirl on January 09, 2010
    WOW! I do not know where you go with Blaise and Draco sharing Hermione, but if the ends justify the need so be it! Hey I love triad especially with this 3.
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  • From Robs on January 09, 2010
    Fabulous chapter! Hermione sure is playing a dangerous game now. I can't help but wonder how it will turn out in the end. And I can't believe Draco shared her with Blaise! (Not that I'm complaining, it was hot! :P) And, I think Hermione was getting a bit big for her boots. I can't believe she's asked to leave! I have an inkling that he won't let her, but then again, that was part of their agreement wasn't it? EEEEEE, I can't wait for the next chapter!
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  • From Robs on January 06, 2010
    Another excellent chapter! So Hermione finally got her wish, but didn't seem to enjoy it all that much. Draco is being woefully ignorant, I feel. I think I am too, actually; should I know the importance of the choker? Have I not being paying attention? I do like the fact that Draco is willing to defend Hermione though, even if she is just his whore. For the time being, at least. I think she's close to being discovered.

    Christmas was wonderful, thank you! Since this was our first christmas in the new house, the family all came to us which was fun. Apart from my 2 (younger) cousins, who are both spoilt brats! And I'm back on the job hunt again LOL. I decided it wasn't really what I wanted to do, so I'm looking into doing a law degree now. Might happen xD.

    Look forward to the next chapter!
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  • From margaritama on January 05, 2010
    the angst is killing me....sigh
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  • From ANON - Jen on January 05, 2010
    gosh , i cannot even being to tell you how much i adore your story ! the plotline is pretty original and new to me as i've read alot of dramione fics out there lol. you're spelling and grammar is practically flawless which is definitely a selling point for fanfiction [tho my error-ful captilization and punctuation are mostly due to habit lolz]. i love how you make your chapters lengthy and always leaving the reader wanting more ! and i like how you stay true or close to hermione and draco's personality and how you describe things , simple yet imaginable . you're a wonderful writer &i'm anxiously awaiting for your next chapter :)
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  • From RZZMG1111 on January 04, 2010
    Keep it coming! My curiosity is piqued. Maybe a tad more risque bedroom scenes would be interesting. Also, would like to see more of Theo and Blaise's nefarious plans for Draco and Jeanne.
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  • From mrequecky on January 04, 2010
    Oh wow... That's tough. Loved the updates!!!
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  • From ANON - paigeey07 on January 03, 2010
    oh really? I'd love to go to london one day. Merry Christmas and Happy New Year to you too. Great chapter btw!!
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