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Reviews for Uncoffined

By : LadyofClunn
  • From HighViscosity on January 03, 2010
    Yay!

    Well done, again, this is a realistic depiction of what could have happened, and how someone like Hermione would have had to behave in order to survive. It's sad and I can really see the scenes you're setting.

    Don't be afraid about the next chapter, this is YOUR story; as long as nobody acts in a way that cannot be explained, then we can merely be grateful that you're sharing your story with us.
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  • From dragongirl on January 03, 2010
    New year new adventures........ Bring it on!
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  • From Robs on December 22, 2009
    I'M BACK! Wow, those last 3 chapters were brilliant! From now on I am so keeping up with everything; catching up is taking such a long time! I was really expecting Hermione to go back to the warren, and for Draco to find some other way of getting her. Or she got brought in for stealing another vegetable or something. But I love the way it turned out. The way Theo made her decide to stay... and I think Draco is falling. Hard. I'm intrigued to find out how long it takes him to figure out who she really is. And how he reacts when he does. I'm hoping by then he'll be in too deep to let go.... Look forward to the next chapter!
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  • From Sheebsterz on December 22, 2009
    So I just read all the chapters today and I have to say that I'm loving it! I reallllyyy can't wait for you to update!!! So excited for more :) :) Keep up the good work! :D
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  • From redneckpassion on December 21, 2009
    This story is utterly delightful. I keep waiting for the moment when things will turn sour, but at the same time I keep hoping they won't.
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  • From ANON - Enyo on December 19, 2009
    Ahh I forgot to review for the prev chapter so here are two reviews for you:
    chap 6: The intimacy shown here as well as the innocence of "Jeanne" is just splendid, I think you've done a really wonderful job in portraying just how emotional and deep this is getting!

    chap 7: The backstories for both Draco and Jeanne are really intricately done, I like how you have wonderful acts in which both of them are acting out in their own way as we can see both of them growing closer? I'm not sure but hopefully things get better, I wonder if Draco will eventually find out "Jeanne"s identity.

    I'm sad you won't be updating until New Years, this is just too good of a read to have it on hold for so long! *Pouts*

    Thanks for the wonderful update, have a wonderful holiday and new year and don't forget about us readers who will be waiting patiently when you have internet access again!! :)

    -Enyo
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  • From margaritama on December 18, 2009
    that was gut-wrenching...he's clearly in love with her and she is falling for him. what a world they have built indeed?
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  • From ANON - paigeey07 on December 18, 2009
    yay!!!! I don't know, I'm in the central time zone. I look at the site every few hours so I know when everyone updates. *cough* no life *cough*. Great chap btw.can't wait til you update again. Merry Christmas and Happy New Yea, enjoy Germany!
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  • From dragongirl on December 18, 2009
    This was simply wonderful. Merry Christmas!!!!!! And enjoy Germany we are going to miss you in the meantime..
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  • From Chibionna on December 18, 2009
    ....WHY DO YOU WANT TO LEAVE ME?! *cries* :D I'm glad you are going out and about and exploring the world! Maybe it will give you some new inspirations for this or another story! I love the story, so very much! I hope you have fun! I don't think its winter there, so bring your sun tan lotion! If it is winter, bring some sweaters! :D I can't wait until after the New Year! Take lots of pictures!

    ~Chibi
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 15, 2009
    It's good to see Malfoy developing some... empathy? He seems to be starting to care for her. It's still a tense, scary story, but at least there are glimpses of hope.
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  • From ANON - FallenLeaf on December 15, 2009
    Wow, I love your story! You really have a great style of writing. I love how you write and the set up of the story is awesome. I am so looking forward to reading more! I like your story so much!!!
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  • From Insolence on December 15, 2009
    With each new chapter I'm in danger of running out of (intelligible) compliments. So I'll just keep quiet like a good little girl, and maybe you'll update more often. ^_~
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  • From dragongirl on December 12, 2009
    As the dear Molly will say... the more the merrier... of course in this case about chapters, lol And hey at least you are good; my story cannot come out my head and funny everytime that I try to put it on paper it get more like a spagueti when you don't see the begining or the end... LOL! Keep them coming I hope that bunny bit you a lot in the future... Happy Holidays!
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  • From swissmiss on December 12, 2009
    oh no! i hope you're still updating this! i think it's amazingly realistic and i can't wait to find out what happens next. MAJOR KUDOS. i would love to receive updates, so i plan to email you as soon as i'm done writing this. once again, fantastic!
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