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By : LadyofClunn
  • From ANON - m.z on December 03, 2009
    AMAZING ...truly spectacular....i can't wait for the plot to heat up!!! and for their relationship to develop
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  • From lemonade8 on December 03, 2009
    Am enjoying your story. I can see why she would take up his offer, she's the kind of person who would think of others before her own sensibilities. Does she have some provisions for when she is discovered to alert Molly and Arthur? I would think it would be dangerous for them to show themselves at the op box if she had been discovered. Or is she so overwhelmed that she didn't think of it? You probably have it worked out, I'm just impatient with my questions.
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  • From From56to62 on December 03, 2009
    oh gosh i haaaaaaate waiting for new chapter to come out! And i hate waiting for all the answers to be revealed!! Like what in the hell was that red illegal potion that nippy gave her?! Or and i just incredibly thick and missed something??? lol. It was brilliant, as usual. Actually, it's really really starting to remind me of beauty and the beast! Could totally be a twist on that one. I'm excited to see more of Draco's character developement as he seems rather contradictory at the moment. Nice guy, but up to no good?? Raised well but by blood-prejudice murderers? MORE MORE MORE!
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  • From ANON - paigeey07 on December 02, 2009
    yes, I do. :)
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  • From HighViscosity on December 02, 2009
    Thanks for updating!

    There are a few errors, most of which I'm guessing came from uploading from Microsoft Word...
    1. First sentence, you repeat "slipped into the guest room" twice in the same sentence.
    2. There's an unnecessary comma "after, decimating" in the paragraph where Voldemort killed Narcissa
    3. "without ever [giving revealing] a name or address to anyone..."
    I mean no disrespect, I'm just trying to be helpful... hope that's alright.

    And as far as the story: Draco thinking on his childhood was touchingly sweet, and how he chose life over his mother's dead body was very saddening.
    Of course Hermione would spend two hours on a contract, I kind of tittered at that.
    I hope she's careful of gaining weight, because it probably wouldn't take much to make him see her for who she is, and it'd be much more fun if it happened in the midst of an argument or something.

    Looking forward to the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - Michelle on November 29, 2009
    I LOVE your story! I read it twice over already... please update soon! I am dying to know what happens next!
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  • From dragongirl on November 28, 2009
    Only one request.... more more more
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  • From ANON - eminite on November 19, 2009
    oh man this story is super awesome and I CAN'T wait for you to update!!
    HURRY HURRY HURRY!!
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  • From smmz79 on November 19, 2009
    wow these last two chaps have been great i am really looking forward to this story and i love the way that you are going with it... i like this draco i think that he has a lot of different sides to him that are going to be excellent to see.... great job
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  • From Robs on November 18, 2009
    This was a fantastic chapter! I love the way Hermione notices all the little details, since she hasn't had any of it for a while. So Sraco hasn't realised who it is yet? I wonder how long it will take him to figure out her deception... I really hope she accepts his offer. She could do more than I think she thinks she could if she did! I look forward to the next chapter!

    On a side note; I hope you're feeling better now, lovely! *hugs*
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  • From jaceni50 on November 18, 2009
    Loved ch. 4! Can't wait for the next chapter as always. Great story and I can't believe I said Hermione was weak! Do you know how many chapters it will be or are you just going with the flow? Hopefully you'll be able to update soon. :D
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  • From Insolence on November 18, 2009
    I have no idea how you're going to keep up with 'un' chapter names and, honestly, I don't care - as long as you keep telling a story instead of writing a piece of fanfiction, I'll keep coming back for more. :)

    And yes, that was a real smile...
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  • From KisaJones on November 18, 2009
    Wow ! I loved your story and the way you write !
    Can't wait for the next chapter ^^
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 17, 2009
    Oh Yay! Another chapter. I can't wait to see where this goes. Will she stay or will she go? She didn't really seem to have a problem the last time this happened, and he would be paying well.... can't wait for the update.
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  • From ANON - rena on November 17, 2009
    A very original idea. Like it. Please update soon!
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