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Reviews for My Master, My Savior

By : BeautifulScript
  • From ANON - Queen Nilya on September 08, 2009
    I LOVE IT!!! The Characters are well developed and so far the story line hasn't any holes....I am very much looking forward to reading more!! Please add me to your mailing list about updates - if you have one!
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  • From ANON - S.S on September 01, 2009
    Brilliant chapter
    Can't wait for more
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  • From Hambares on September 01, 2009
    Good thing Lucius stopped by and gave Severus something to think about. That may just help Harry cope in the long run.
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  • From dragonfly8605 on August 31, 2009
    OMG!!!!!!!!!!! This story is fantastic!!! I can not wait for the next chapter. PLease Please Please update soon. It's starting so good, nice flow, and it's nice to see someone actually use spell check or have a beta.
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  • From ANON - Catstaff on August 31, 2009
    Poor Harry. He seems to think the evil he knows is better than the one he doesn't know. Hopefully Severus will be able to change that without too much trauma for either of them.

    I'm also glad you understood that my bit of criticism was meant to be constructive, and not a bashing of your writing. My dad worked on a newspaper for 27 years, so if there is one thing I grew up with, it's an editor-ish mindset. I don't look for perfection by any means. Sometimes incorrect grammar is appropriate to the writing in question, especially with fiction. But sometimes things will stick out as being not right.

    Looking forward to coming chapters,
    ~Catstaff
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  • From MorganaWhite on August 31, 2009
    Great chapter! Can't wait for more!
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  • From Veracityrules on August 31, 2009
    This is an excellent fic! I love it, sorry I didn't leave review yesterday. Love the plot.
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  • From straycat13 on August 31, 2009
    yay!! thanks for the fast update it was great! please update soon :)
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  • From ANON - kunitsu on August 31, 2009
    Its a great start, cant wait for more.
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  • From CodyMThomas on August 30, 2009
    I can't WAIT to read more of this! it's addicting!
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  • From AnnaLouise on August 30, 2009
    I like where this story is headed. I'm looking forward to reading more, as you explore this interesting situation.
    I wonder, how it is that Harry could not be recovered, when he was a child. I'm glad that you've put him in a redeemable spot though, with a softer Severus.

    : )
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  • From Hambares on August 30, 2009
    Very powerful start! I can't wait to read more!
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  • From ANON - Catstaff on August 30, 2009
    An excellent beginning to your tale.

    I've only one nit to pick, and that's a single sentence with very awkward construction. Instead of "The son of his tormentor
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  • From ANON - S.S on August 30, 2009
    Very good chapter I hope you continue with the story
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  • From mrequecky on August 30, 2009
    Wow, already love this! Can't wait for more!
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