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Reviews for Ten Steps

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  • From SoriaUndead on November 16, 2009
    UGH! FINALLY!! Hermione is fixing everything... she's almost dead, but she's fixing everything ^_^
    i cannot wait for the rest of the story, regular updates sounds awesome ^_^
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  • From ANON - Luvdonite on November 15, 2009
    Oh come on Harry, just gather him into your loving tender arms. lol
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  • From tiggator on November 15, 2009
    Yes, keep watching Merlin. :) I'm so happy others know now. And come on! Why is Harry so clueless? *sigh* Men. I'll be interested to see what happens when Draco shows him about the magic. Perhaps he won't be so clueless this time... Thanks for another great chapter! -Michelle
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  • From ANON - Amytonks on November 15, 2009
    Yay, now we're getting somewhere! Can't wait for the next chapter!
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  • From maegerakawaii on November 15, 2009
    THANK YOU! I can feel the moment I have been waiting for is finally at hand. This is still a Drarry right? I'm starting to lose track. I really do wish Draco and Harry end up together happily.
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  • From hieisdragoness18 on November 15, 2009
    aww poor mione. still she tried. i hope that the mean old magicks will let draco show harry.
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  • From ANON - akahimena on November 15, 2009
    ::bows:: Thank you so much for that chapter. I hope that I get to read another one soon but you know what line just made me satisfied? Or at least content until next time...
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  • From hieisdragoness18 on November 13, 2009
    *growls* honestly harry is such an idiot for not even considering the dumb vow
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 13, 2009
    Nuuuu! Lol You're killing me! Lmao Please get Draco's head out of his noble backside and make him a bit more selfish! Lol I think us and Harry could forgive a little selfishness lol. Oliver seems to be winning so effortlessly so far XD
    Shigure-san
    x chuu x
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  • From ANON - Sirael on November 12, 2009
    Um ... how to say this. When I began to read your story I felt it was really good. I mean - REALLY - good. You've got a great style, your writing is imaginative and creative. You write without errors, as far as I can tell. You chose a good theme and you gave our favourite pairing as original setting and circumstances as this very often repeated motive of soulmates allows. BUT! I'm not going to complain about the lack of Harry-Draco snogging, because I'm of those who certainly like the tension just before the realtionship fully develops, but ... yes, but ... you are repeating yourself. It lasts at least four chapters already. It's always: Harry comes to Draco. Draco can't say anything, so he says something cruel and drives Harry away. Harry feels guilty because of Oliver, realizes how great a guy Olli is and promises to himself never to do it again. And then it goes all over again. Different setting, different people around, but that's all. It's been what ... four times (maybe I'm exaggerating, I'm sorry if I am, but it really seems like an eternity before something new happens)? It's just ... coulnd't you make some progress already? If you don't want to take the final steps with Draco and Harry (or even Oliver and Harry, at this point I almost wish they would already sleep together :-D), just put in some other complications (like Draco finally snapping and moving away or somehthing) - that's something I would definitively appreciate (as I said before, I love the tension of not-yet-relationships), but, of course, I don't know about your other readers.

    Good luck writing,
    S.
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  • From ANON - Amy on November 12, 2009
    Oh, my heart hurts for Draco. I want him to just scream in his frustration just moments before Harry leaves so Harry could hear and come back and make it all better. I love this story and how it's slowly but intensely building up.
    And yeah Harry, while you're kissing Oliver you just keep reminding yourself how you don't need Draco. Yep. Sounds like a plan.
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  • From automatikjoy on November 11, 2009
    I was sure that Clive would have spilled the beans
    to Harry by now...maybe next chapter or two???

    please update soon!
    My day is only complete when you a new update
    on a story :)
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  • From maegerakawaii on November 11, 2009
    This is so upsetting, but the end will make all the wait worth it. Now, I just have to convince myself that that really is the case.
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  • From SoriaUndead on November 11, 2009
    it is a bit torturous to "watch" Harry and Oliver kiss when I know Draco is supposed to be in Olli's place. Maybe I should start wearing silver and green and wave a little Draco flag as it seems like this is a game which is impossible for Draco to win. *GO DRACO!!*
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  • From chelbear on November 11, 2009
    ahhh so good! theres too much suspense. i want to kick both of those boys :P
    but its so realistic in that sense. like, people are often this dumb with their relationships. so stubborn!

    anddd carridwen is updated! :)
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