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Reviews for Yule Ball Debauchery

By : MayorHaggar
  • From Astender on February 09, 2010
    This was great! My first Harry/Pavarti and I'm almost mad jkr didn't give them a chance haha well done(:
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  • From Daye on February 01, 2010
    This is very good. I like the original pairing. Not so keen on Ron's protrayal or the possible Harry/Hermione stuff but I do like Parvarti. It will interesting to see the results if she's taken instead of Ron for the second task; is Harry going to be eager to hang around and play the hero if Parvati is on the line?

    Side note: it would be nice if Harry 'returned the favour' for all those bjs, he seems to have been entirely on the receiving end thus far.
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  • From WhiteWhiskey on January 15, 2010
    Good chapter, and I get the feeling that Hermione just got an eyefull.
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  • From pfeil on December 31, 2009
    Ooh, Hermione joining in after the task? Win!
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  • From PerfectionistWithADD on December 31, 2009
    Great 3rd chapter. I like how you're showing that sex doesn't rule their lives now that they've done the horizontal mombo. While I hope and pray that the direction turns into a H/P/Hr love triangle, I'm not holding my breath nor am I asking for confirmation of that pairing. I just don't think Ron deserves Hermione. He's a right prat who needs his bloody mouth superglued to his arsehole so he isn't constantly defying physics by spewing all that shite. Looking forward to the next chapter. Later.
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 08, 2009
    MayorHagger, I realize this is a bit of a time-consuming suggestion, but how about copying what you have written from your laptop to your PC - and by "copying", I mean retyping on your PC as you read it off your laptop. I only say this because I've had a few hardware issues myself sometimes(usually with me, it's just writing and forgetting to save for a while and then - oops! power outage, cursing, screaming, trying to rewrite from memory when the power comes back on - and I really like this story and would like to see you continue. The romance is well done, the smut is very good, I love the characterization and it's a refreshing change of pace to see a non-Harry/Ginny story where there's no Ginny-bashing.
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  • From vipertooth on November 15, 2009
    please update soon
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 24, 2009
    Story: great! Amount of story: bad! Want more!
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  • From PerfectionistWithADD on October 11, 2009
    While I would really, really, really enjoy you turning this into a H/Hr/ParP story. It is not required, only strongly encouraged. If not, you could possibly put a spin on Hermione liking Parvati instead of Harry and just being disappointed at their relationship. She could possibly find comfort in the arms of Parvati's sister, Padma. It would be a little hard to get them together, but it would be worth it to have a side relationship to this story that wasn't exactly traditional. Any mentions of forced sex/rape in this story will immediately burn my mind(and interest in this story) to a crisp. Please don't do that to us. I do agree with you that the whole canon pairing of Ron/Hermione is pretty stupid. They have nothing in common, and those that say that they argue like an old married couple, conveniently forget to add the phrase 'before they get a divorce' to the end. A verbally abusive or physically abusive relationship never works out well for at least one of them. Also convenient, Harry and Hermione discover feelings for the 2 youngest Weasleys just after the books mention that their mother used a love potion on their father. Then the whole thing was glossed over and the whole 'sudden attraction' they had to the redheads in HBP was brought out of left field. Oh well, hope the story works out well for you, later.
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  • From ANON - D on October 06, 2009
    A very good update. Glad to see you're continuing this excellent story. WHile HP/PrP has never been a favorite of mine you do tell the story exceptionally well.
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  • From pfeil on October 04, 2009
    Awesome -- I love the interactions with Hermione, and hope that goes further ;)

    Not to mention that he won't be rescuing moRon from the lake this time.
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  • From serenagold on October 04, 2009

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  • From ANON - janerox on October 03, 2009
    Poor Hermione! Ah yes, the curse of smart unpretty girls everywhere. Do everything for a guy and he doesnt think you're dating material, but happily preserves you for his jerk of a best friend.

    Hermione is too good for Harry. Perhaps when she's happily involved with a nice guy of her own (the word 'nice' excludes Ron, you understand) Harry will realize what he let slip away... and it'll be too late.

    Please don't let this become a threesome fic. Just because Hermione has plenty of practice being a third wheel (her friendship with Harry and Ron - the boys never pick her side over each other) doesnt mean she likes or deserves further practice.
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  • From DarQuing on October 03, 2009
    Actually, I think I prefer a little smut with my plot. Either way, I'm enjoying this story and I look forward to more. :)

    Update soon! :)
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  • From fightinghokie on October 02, 2009
    The best Harry/Pavarti story out there! I really hope you continue to write more chapters. It's refreshing to read a story with well written plot and erotic smut. Too often you get either one or the other in fanfictions. Keep up the great work!
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