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Reviews for Yule Ball Debauchery

By : MayorHaggar
  • From ANON - Arashikaze on August 09, 2016

    I absolutely love this story! Great character development and storyline so far! please please continue it! Gutted I can't read more right now :(


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  • From MacPhisto on February 10, 2012
    overjoyed that you've changed your opinion on Ron :)
    and really enjoyed the focus on Lavender's bum ;)
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  • From MacPhisto on February 10, 2012
    poor Hermione...
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  • From MacPhisto on February 09, 2012
    probably the most overlooked pairing :)
    so much potential!
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 31, 2012
    okay what happened to the formatting for the first 4 chaps becomming one long running paragraph?
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  • From ANON - JD on January 28, 2012
    Can I say awesome and welcome back?
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  • From BlueAlquimista on January 28, 2012
    The first chapter was fine... but then... you said you want to do something original???

    ...and the first thing you do is to take the Ron-character and make him a typical Fanon/stupid sidekick???... and Hermione the typical star-stuck girl???

    "they seem so wrong for each other..."... This is called unresolved sexual tension... They only need a good fuck!!!

    "Ron was decidedly jealous that Harry had gotten himself a girlfriend"... very OOC!!!... as Ron was sooooo jealous when Harry kissed Cho... totally coherent... LoL

    "Ron had a hot temper
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  • From newtothis on January 28, 2012
    good start, ron does have a point hermoine does boss them around, and now she being nicer to harry but not to ron that would hurt, he going to be heartbroken when he find out hermoine like harry. i like ron and hermione together.

    since you making it ooc anyway, can ron have some fun if harry getting a few girl ron should at least get couple.


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  • From ANON - kilcanon on January 27, 2012
    Thank you for continuing this story. It has been a fun read, and I can't wait to see what you have planned.
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  • From Daye on January 27, 2012
    Yay! This is back!

    And yay! Ron is getting some. :-D Good chapter, though I'd advise against too much Ron action. This is supposed to be a Harry/Parvati fic after all.

    It'll be interesting to see if Harry's actions in the lake change much owing it to being Parvati down there and not Ron. We shall see. Perhaps in another two years?
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  • From TomOfDC on January 27, 2012
    Hermione/Ron?
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  • From ANON - Mad Gear Gang on July 06, 2010
    Dear Mayor Haggar,
    We are holding your daughter. If you ever want to see her again, you will update this fic asap.

    PS. Don't even think about calling those @$$holes Guy and Cody.
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  • From Shago123 on June 21, 2010
    beautiful story. i cant wait to read the next chapter.
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  • From nonentity on February 25, 2010
    Just read the first two chapters. I like the way the plot integrates into the Goblet of Fire storyline. The romance is sweet, and I like that Harry doesn't know what he's doing. The porn star sex and feats of stamina make me giggle a bit, but fanfiction smut is nothing if it's not fantasy fulfillment. I like nice!Lavender. It's good to see acknowledgment that many 14 year olds do have sex. I do think Hermione is a bit overly shrill and smug, but overall, it's a nice little fic.
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  • From Daye on February 25, 2010
    Aww! Poor Hermione! This chapter is really hard on her!

    On the one hand, It's a bit sad that this chapter doesn't advance the overall plot at all, on the other hand the changed point of view is a really good idea and I think gives the fic an added bit of depth. I think the writing of the prose has improved a bit from the first set of chapters. So good work all around.

    The only minor quibble I have, is really a bit more of a missed opportunity. Having the trio explain all their adventures to Parvati 'off screen' as it were. Especially about Sirius. Them having to explain that no Sirius wasn't trying to kill Harry last year and was trying to kill Ron's rat, could have been a fun scene.

    Looking forward to more.
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