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Reviews for Misplaced Trust

By : MysticWitchRini
  • From BabyMomma2fo on November 08, 2009
    wow this chapter was amazing and can't wait for the next chapter and if you're next story is half as good as this one I'll be sure to read it and i'ma start reveiwing more often it would be ashame to abandon such good stories cause no one reveiws

    Much Luv
    Babymomma
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  • From BabyMomma2fo on November 06, 2009
    I love this story it amazing and i can't wait for the next chapter i check everyday to see if the next ones up but never reviewed a story this good got 2 be reviewed though why people aren't reveiwing is beyond me but well i shouldn't be talking cause this is the first time i reveiw this story so yea enways i love it and can't wait for the next chapter

    much luv

    Babymomma
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  • From ANON - moar on October 25, 2009
    Why yes, yes I am :D
    Very hot chapter, also very cute. And pool old Voldy, pining over someone he can't have.
    Gah! It's been months since I've used a strap on, this story really makes me want to :(
    Keep up the good work hun!
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  • From ANON - jeff on October 23, 2009
    glad you did not leave Harry under Dumble control for very long
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  • From ANON - moar on October 23, 2009
    Glad Harry got his head sorted out and didn't go nutso at Bella. And yay for Bella's wandering fingers!! I love slipping my fingers in during a blowjob. One of the hottest times was when I was having a shower with my boyfriend and I was sucking him off while fingering myself. Then I just used my juiced up fingers on his ass. Blew his load almost right away. He dragged me back to be and thanked me for it in most wonderful ways.
    Anyway...YAY for you and putting more of that kinda thing in. Hoping to see some more in the 'cumming' chapters. Oh and speaking of cumming...Harry's tongue + Bella's just fucked, cum filled pussy = hot. Just saying ;)
    Oh and I managed to get my friend writing. It should be up sometime soon. I'll let you know when :D
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  • From ANON - moar on October 21, 2009
    Yes, it's very good. So very few fics have it and it's so hot! Guys and ass play rarely mix so I guess that translates to people not writing it either which is a shame because it's so hot. Same with eating their own cum. Not much hotter than having a guy go down on me after dropping a nice big creamy load in/on me, but again not many people write about that. It's such a shame really. Though it's harder in the real world to find a guy who will let me fuck him with a strap on or eat his own load than it is to find stories about it. I'm trying to get a friend to write one but he keeps saying he isn't a good writer. I'll get him eventually though!
    Anyway, keep up with your fic, it's great. And damn that Dumbledore for screwing with Harry's head. I hope Bella finds out then sneaks into the school to set things right. Then maybe up to the Room of Requirements for some fun time...Ah god I'm so horny right now...I gotta go take care of this before I soak my chair.
    Toodles!!
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  • From jessirose85 on October 19, 2009
    I just read ch 18-20 and I must say that your story keeps getting better and better...I have been away for a week so that's why I have been reviewing...sorry xx
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  • From ANON - moar on October 16, 2009
    MORE BELLA FUCKING HARRY UP THE ASS!!!!
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  • From ANON - Bulldog on October 12, 2009
    Very good so far! Can't wait for the next chapter!

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  • From jessirose85 on October 03, 2009
    I am sorry I haven't reviewed in ages...I have been having counselling 2 days a week and visiting job agencies

    I do love this story and it's the story I always look for when I come on this site

    More please xxx
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  • From LadyJMarie on September 29, 2009
    Bravo. This is an intereting premise, and so far it's going in a great direction.
    J.
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  • From ANON - anon on September 20, 2009
    You asked for reviews, so I'm giving mine. The story line is interesting; I don't think I've seen one like it. Seeing where you're going with this plot keeps me reading. And here we come to the "BUT," as in "I like this, but..."
    Your grammar isn't as bad as some I've seen on this site and others, but this story is good enough to deserve better. Find yourself a beta. And when I say that you should find a beta, I don't mean that you should have a friend to read it over and tell you how wonderful your story is. A beta should be someone who will correct spelling and grammar, and be able to tell you why those changes are necessary. A good beta is also someone that you can talk to about story ideas. A good beta is an honest voice: he or she will tell you that a plot twist isn't working, and also tell you what you are doing right. A good beta can help make a good story into a great story. Do yourself a favor and take advantage of the betas on this site. If you do, you will be far more satisfied with both this story, and your own writing.
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  • From azphxbrd on September 17, 2009
    I like your story so far,and Im trying to figure who is going to switch sides.Keep up the good work.
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  • From jessirose85 on September 16, 2009
    Great chapter...I cannot wait to see how Hermione and Draco act around each other xxx
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  • From LadyJMarie on September 15, 2009
    Can't wait to read the next chapter. Keep up the great work!
    J.
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