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Reviews for The Third Time is a Charm

By : ladyedgecombe
  • From ANON - Kawaii on November 29, 2009
    Lovely story.... very nicely written. You have some great talent there man!
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  • From ANON - nari-chan on November 29, 2009
    as usual amazing work, the ladies are going to be interesting to get to know and know more in detail as the story goes on . i love the head strong lady black and lady malfoy. And the saying " while the man are away the ladies will play." fit perfectly lol well cant wait till the next update
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  • From kaasan on November 28, 2009
    Great chapter! I really like the way that Seventh Born found Peter. What was he really doing there? Was he spying on Lady Black for Voldemort, and why? He will have fun trying to return to Voldemort from the middle of the Forest of Dean without a wand to help him. The meeting between the ladies went very well. I thought that it was great the way that Becca surprised Lady Black with the reason for Seventh Born's name and the revelation of the Seven being snakes.
    Waiting as patiently as I can manage for the next chapter of this wonderful story. Keep up the great writing!!
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  • From ANON - Sly on November 28, 2009
    the chapter was as great as always ... i think that lady black is not to out of character. The screaming that welcomed Becca when she portkeyed into the entrance hall instead of the sitting room was a very in character like walburga. But i'm curious why becca let not kill her the rat... or would it change too many of their plans? or make the future too unpredictable?
    However i think that she would have interrogated becca more, especially after the resetting of the wards. But all in all a great chapter. i'm curious about the trainig the men will do, so i hope we will get to read something about that in the next chapter.

    Greetings,
    Sly
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  • From ANON - Judy on November 28, 2009
    I liked how you had Peter in the story. I agree on how you wrote the chracters I mean harry is human he is going to wimp a little he has had a lot thrown at him in a short period of time keep up the writing and mainly have fun :
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  • From Yamiyomi on November 27, 2009
    Hello,
    Just to tell you that this story plot is good,but Severus is out-of-character Harry seems to be too weak and well it wasnt the kind of story that i wanted to read but its good just this story is too simple-minded im sorry if you take this as an insult but i thought that i wouldnt be capable of seeing the end of this story but i can and,just like a movie,a movie that you can guess the end its no good in my opinion but,the story plot in general is good but you can see these kind of stories everywhere,but good work...

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  • From ANON - judy on November 27, 2009
    I love this story keep up the good work
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  • From ANON - Kim on November 26, 2009
    NOW this is even better meal than the plate of Thanksgiving goodies! I love how you incorporated "The Seven" into a prophacy! I guess partially because I've always been drawn to snakes....(shame mmy hubby wont let me have any! Marriage: compramises, compramises)LOL

    And I never woulda thought I would have liked Madame Wallburga! She is really growing on me......
    And you slash scene is even better than a big batch of the finest chocolate....I will re-iterate...any type of book you ever decide to write? I want on the list to be one of the first buyers! Dont matter what genre...I want on your list! grins

    You made my holiday...now I can go onto the Pumpkin pie now.....gathering a plate ful of goodies for you.....
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  • From ANON - Kim on November 23, 2009
    There ya go! No one has thought about the women being the answer! LOL And when you think about it who else can be as fierce or determined? And I LOVE how Madame Black kept Lucius in his place....she would be a hard one to stand against......Now how to make Sirius sit long enough to listen? hmmmm I can already picture you have already figured out how to deal with him! grins.....I am always so excited to open a new chappie from you.....I am never dissapointed! You are a amazing writer!
    Sitting down Grandma's chocolate creme merange pie for my fav authoress!
    (At least I didnt do her chco mine meat one! ) Shudders....we will stick with chocolate if thats ok!
    LOL
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  • From ANON - nari-chan on November 22, 2009
    i like the ladies and how narsissa can make malfoy shut up lol
    well good work and cant wait till u update :)
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  • From kaasan on November 22, 2009
    Excellent chapter my dear. Voldemort won't know what hit him when the ladies get involved with the movement to get rid of him and Dumbledore. Lady Black is a force to be reckoned with, as is Lady Malfoy. I don't envy Lucius when she gets upset about her children. He is just so stubborn, I hope that she can help him to see the light... pun intended. Can hardly wait until Wednesday for the next chapter! I was also glad to hear that you are posting a tamer version on fanfiction.net for those who like the story but not the Snarry goodness. Keep up the great writing!!
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  • From ANON - Judy on November 22, 2009
    I love this story
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  • From kaasan on November 21, 2009
    Another wonderful chapter! I really like the lullaby that Becca sang at the end of the chapter, it was so sweet. Can hardly wait for the next installment of this great work.
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  • From ANON - Jen on November 21, 2009
    First of all, this review isn't a flame. I personally hate reading slash stories, they just aren't that interesting to me. This story however has such a well thought out story line and well developed characters that I HAVE to make an exception. Your ideas are great and you have obviously thought it out at least a little before writing it down.

    Just make sure you finish the story... it's worth it. You're a talented writer and I've enjoyed reading what you have so far, despite my aversion to slash fics. I hope you take that as praise and not criticism. Keep up the good work.

    Now that I've spent the last several hours reading your whole epic thus far I need a walk.

    :D
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  • From ANON - Kim on November 20, 2009
    OHHHH another perfect chapter! I KNEW Malfoy was gonna be a hard butt about something, now I cant help but think if whoever fixes the girls was another species? snickers.....THAT would wake up Mr Snob! LOL And the last bit was touching....getting Reg's mom there with both her son and niece....I cant wait to see what Harry is gonna say about Becka's singing.....winks....she seems a natural with babies....LOL
    Sitting down big plate of fudge bars for your muse....(This one will be a Thanksgiving choco something...hmmmm) :-0)

    If I have trouble with puter and cant holler before hand have a wonderful THANKSGIVING!
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