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Reviews for The Third Time is a Charm

By : ladyedgecombe
  • From ANON - Kim on November 16, 2009
    OHHHH! Finally got to catch up! Look at what I had missed with computer out....sniffs...but these last 3 (4?) chapters more than made up for the withdrawals I was going thru! I love the creation story for the wizarding world, and the whole concept for the reasoning and how to deal with squib children! Gives a whole new slant on magical power and effects of dna breeding and of course the letting it lay to gain thought..I have raised several crops and livestock...did you do FFA or something? grins

    My mind immediately went to line breeding on some parts there...many a "Best of Breed" ribbon gotten that way but also on occasion failures as well.....and poor stuck up Lucius! LOL he hates the thought of having to lower his nose down to the every day merlin-blo society level...I really thought the new time line Severus woulda been more of problem to convince than Malfoy! snickers...

    New strands of thought each time...sections not previously considered in all the fan fics I've read before. If you ever decide to publish a book? I wanna pre-purchase it NOW! grins
    Knocking on wood this "Puter" holds......cant wait to see the next chap and next new twist! :-0)

    Setting down extra plates of double fudgy goodies baked while whining about missing you guys....I done ate enough of them! LOL Kim
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  • From ANON - nari-chan on November 16, 2009
    wonderful work as usual :). i cant wait to read the next chapter please keep up the good work and never give up ok you are too good of a writer to stop .
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  • From kaasan on November 14, 2009
    Alas the end of another wonderful chapter. Will Snape and Malfoy accept the truth of what Severus, Harry and Salazar has said or will they need to be obliviated and sent on their way? I will be waiting as patiently as I can manage for the next chapter of this great work of fanfiction. Keep up the great work!
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  • From ANON - Sly on November 14, 2009
    i absolutely love your story ... it's amazing
    because of this i wanted to ask for your permission to translate this story into german. Of course there would be a link to this page and i would clearly state that it is your story and that i'm only the translator. I would really appreciate it if you would answer me on this one so that i could get started should your answer be positive.

    Apart from that i can only say that you have to keep writing and that i would like to have wednesday to read the next chapter.
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  • From kaasan on November 13, 2009
    Another great chapter! I really like the way that Malfoy and Snape reacted to the Seven. I just hope that their fear of the snakes will not hinder the alliance between them and the Princes. Great history lesson, I can hardly wait for more!! Keep up the great writing!
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  • From kaasan on November 11, 2009
    Great chapter! Will Lucius and Severus be able to learn occulumency quickly enough to be able to hide their meeting with the Princes from Voldemort? The mini floo having the ability to transport the Seven around using parseltongue passwords is ingenious. Keep up the great story line and I can hardly wait for the next installment of this most excellent fic.
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  • From ANON - nari-chan on November 11, 2009
    nice work i cant wait to read the next chapter :)
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  • From kaasan on November 09, 2009
    Another wonderful chapter! I had to laugh when Severus woke up Remus and Regulus with the water spell, that was great! A great introduction of the portraits as well. Harry really surprised Salazar with his parseltongue and his having a basilisk as a familiar. How long will the four of the guys have to be in the time displacement rooms for their training? Waiting patiently for the next installment of this great fic!!
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  • From ANON - nari-chan on November 09, 2009
    wow i love Salazar . amazing work as usual cant wait till u update next :)
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  • From ANON - nari-chan on November 08, 2009
    ha snape and malfoy think they are going crazy i love it! lol
    well wonderful work as usual cant wait for the update :)
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  • From kaasan on November 06, 2009
    Excellent chapter! Ah the joys of confusing Lucius and Severus. Also Griphook seemed to be a bit confused as well. How much can be accomplished while inside the time displacement rooms and how long will it take in real time? Will Lucius and Severus be able to escape from Voldemort? I can hardly wait until the next wonderful installment of this great fic.
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  • From MrsCakeAkaJane on November 06, 2009
    yeahhhh young sev will be saved too. and whats the betting Remus has saved the potters by giving them the tunk. very cool chapter. i love the teachers. i love when Remus said "oh Merlin" he answered. in general I LOVE THIS CHAPTER. ok im breathing again now. and i got a mention at the end *bounces happily* i read this on fanfiction too don't know why i read it twice but i do. keep up the great work and please post again soon.
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  • From ANON - Kim on November 04, 2009
    "Snorts" I should'nt have taken a drink of pop just before the pregnancy hormones kicked in! LOL Almost made a mess, but THAT is exactly what Harry needed! Self recrimination is almost like a addiction for some......shaking head...and Who'da thunk it Dobby part Royal elf or high elf me thinks? grins And the picture in my mind as first born slidddd under table unbeknownst to most...hey, those guys would make great marauders (Reptile style!) winks

    And Remus! To realise even truth about Dumbles...in such a painful way! Shame it could'nt have been narrow minded Sirius (Cause I think he will be hard one to convince)...hmmmm And I love the "Time displacment room" ? Mafoy and Snape not realizing whats a happening but to have to sit and think "Why am I dreaming this?" could drive one batty! hahahahahahaa thier slytherin preservation skills slipping there! CONSTANT VIGILANCE..ROFLMAO

    I loved this chapt..it covered areas I'de not caught or thought of...as has every single one of your chappies! Man, you are the master weaver here! Did you take writing in college, A teacher or ? Cause if not one would swear you did! Laying extra platter of double choco-chunk cookies down...heading back to make choco mousse in time for next chappie!
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  • From danawarner on November 04, 2009
    Great chapter!
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  • From ANON - terrimelfi on November 01, 2009
    I would love to see what you write next. Your a great writer and your stories are great too.


    Thank you,


    Terri
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