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Reviews for The Third Time is a Charm

By : ladyedgecombe
  • From ANON - Kim on October 16, 2009
    OK, OK setting out big plate of double choco chip chunk cookies...I forgive the evil cliffy before you've almost made up for it! This was soo sweet and gave so much more depth than the hot, steamy sex scenes (Although that? Will bring the remainder of the choco treats out!) Now poor Remus! does he have a signifigant suprise in store other then the cure of wolfy-ness? I cant wait for next chapter...willl have choco treats ready! Kim (becca's secret? hmmmm wondering....)


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  • From danawarner on October 16, 2009
    Sirius is so paranoid.
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  • From ANON - nari-cjan on October 15, 2009
    good job cant wait to read what happens next :)
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  • From ANON - kim on October 15, 2009
    OMG! How cruel! You coulda done your cliffie after he put Sev out of his misery with the YES and then let the special congrats sex be the cliffy! agghhhh! Now you do know your gonna have all your readers waiting with baited breathe for the next chapter........(Mind racing through possibilities...he cant say no cause their stil together in future but he is as insecure if not worse than Sev....buttttt AGHHHH)

    sniffs I would throw cookie crumbs at you but wont jeopadize the fast update of new chappy because of crumbe missels...so will reserve bowl.....and then will throw fresh baked choco chip cookies...LOL

    DOes the smell of them fresh baked cause your muse to type faster? Just let me know!
    (Grabbing flour bag and turning on stove..) LOL Kim


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  • From kaasan on October 15, 2009
    Oooh evil cliffhanger of doom!!! I really love the direction that the fic is going. I can hardly wait to find out what will happen next.
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  • From lady2087 on October 14, 2009
    ArGGG! Did you have to leave a cliff hanger! I really enjoyed this chapter. Your ideas for this story has obviously been well-thought out and I cannnot wait for the next chapter. Well-done.
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  • From ANON - nari-chan on October 14, 2009
    cliff hanger! please update soon !!!!!
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  • From ANON - nari-chan on October 13, 2009
    loved it ! i cant wait to read the next chapter and then ill give you triple chocolate chip cookies! this time :). they have a chocolate frosting and 2 kinds of chocolate chips dark and milk and even white chocolate.
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  • From Sheli on October 10, 2009
    I actually had to login and leave a review. This is one of the best stories I have ever read on this site. It is well thought out, complex, has fabulous character development and makes allowances for time paradox. You are a truly gifted story teller and I will be watching this story for updates. I couldn't stop reading until the last chapter.
    The only thing I notice is that you keep mentioning Harry and Severus's soulmate status a little often. It does get very repetitive and we've known since the first chapter. So now that Becca can't go back to her time will she hook up with Regulus? I'm interested to know how they'll circumvent Dumbledore though with his multitude of tracking and monitoring devices for Harry and will we get a peek into the other timeline to see what eventually happens?
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  • From ANON - nari-chan on October 10, 2009
    loved it cant wait till the next chapter !
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  • From ANON - tamikolee on October 08, 2009
    As usual a great chap. Now if you are taking bribes, I'll send you some sugar quills if you bring my Ice Prince Lucius Malfoy (swoon)to the side of light......please! LOL.
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  • From dragonfly8605 on October 08, 2009
    If I havent reviewed this story yet then I need to be hit. I cant remember if I did or not. Your story is amazing. very well thought out, nicely paced, everything really helps the story along. The chapters aren't to short its not like your posting anything just to post and get reviews. I wish I had your skill I really do. It is really one of the BEST fics I've read in a long time. PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ finish it. I dont care if it takes years just dont drop it.
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  • From ANON - nari-chan on October 08, 2009
    great chapter :) i cant wait to see what happens next!!!! i think Becca secret is she loves Regulus? or maybe remus ?....
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  • From ANON - qwerty on October 08, 2009
    I see that the team is slowly coming together. Will things continue to smolder between Reg and Becca and eventually heat up?
    Good chapter!
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  • From ANON - nari-chan on October 04, 2009
    good chapter cant wait to read what happens next :)
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