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Reviews for The Third Time is a Charm

By : ladyedgecombe
  • From ANON - tamikolee on September 20, 2009
    Hi, I am really enjoying your story, I can't wait for the next chap. Thanks
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  • From danawarner on September 20, 2009
    I'm so glad I found this story! I love it! Keep going!
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  • From ANON - dominique1 on September 19, 2009
    ilove the fac that harry has little snakes but i still want to know how the merge together when harry is older are if the will start another line because harry has seven children and litle harry will have seven children their will beto set of harrys and sev's are will they merge together when their older are will they just become grandparenst to themselves but either way i love it
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  • From ANON - "Wishdragon on September 18, 2009
    Love this story please write more. I want to know what is going to happen.
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  • From llyoung on September 18, 2009
    I love the seven little snakelings.
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  • From DeathDancer on September 18, 2009
    This is actually very good. I've noticed that occasionally, you forget to close off the quotations when someone speaks. It can be distracting, but a quick read through will fix it right up! And other than surface errors, this is a very well-written story.

    Becca is a strong female character, but because of the situation, she doesn't seem too powerful. And since she isn't part of the main pairing, I don't see a problem with her at all. Snape is rather out-of-character, but considering the revelation he had with Harry, it's quite understandable; I'm glad he can still be a snarky git when he needs to be.

    I am impatiently waiting for more.

    Death.
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  • From ANON - dominque1 on September 17, 2009
    i love it i hope that everything works out i also hope that they are able to remove the blocks on harry when he's a baby and i would like to know if baby harry will merge with big harry good job
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 17, 2009
    I just wanted to tell you I've been reading your story and think it's totally awesome!
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  • From sanda on September 17, 2009
    good chapters
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  • From llyoung on September 16, 2009
    Wonderful story. I'm really enjoying reading it. And since you said it was also on another site, I went looking and found it and now get to read up to chapter 18. Thanks for mentioning that more chapters were up elsewhere.
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  • From MyaMalfoy on September 16, 2009
    OMG!!! I love it! Read it through without stopping, or without reviewing each chapter, because it was just that good! I can't wait for Chapter 13!
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  • From sanda on September 16, 2009
    good chapters, have a whole chocolate cake for your hard work, or any other kind of cake that you want.
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  • From ANON - Hotaru on September 15, 2009
    Please don't stop writing any time soon. The plot line is amazing and the extra details are juicy! Love the story so far, and I can't wait to read the next chapters.
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  • From Makovaso on September 13, 2009
    Good chapter, please update soon.
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  • From ajgordon on September 13, 2009
    Ooooo! Royal colurs that's interesting. And a blue orb...? Good story so far, I can't wait to read more.

    Cheers, MeToo
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