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Reviews for The Third Time is a Charm

By : ladyedgecombe
  • From kaasan on February 28, 2010
    Wonderful chapter! Keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - Mona on February 24, 2010
    I know I said this before but I just love this story! It's entertaining, exciting, suspenseful and unpredictable. You can never tell what happens. You have such an imagination! I can't get enough...Oh, and I am glad Harry got to meet his parents.
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  • From Raie on February 24, 2010
    This story gets to me every time I read a new chapter. The way you are working the characters to get "the job" done (so to speak) is great. If it were me, I would have them all tied up or running around like chickens with their heads cut off. LOL You do so well keeping all the plot lines straight. The answer Harry gave James brought tears to my eyes. BTW I see you sending out cookies and other gooie yummy stuff to your readers...if you every have a reason to send me something, please make it crunchy apples or sweet seedless grapes..I can't have all that good stuff anymore :( :)
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  • From ANON - kim on February 23, 2010
    OHHH you can almost sense the escalating urgency as them devolve faster and faster! And who'da thunk a connection to the Prince line through James? It almost brings a pic of a family tapestry to my mind...Poor Lily, checking her if she had fever...I almost expected to hear a big "SLAP" where she knocked her hand away. She def. was the brightest Witch of her day wasnt she? I'm firing up the oven again to add the the chocolate (was it brownies or sheet cake I baked last?) to have ready for next one! Whatever you wish my Author'ess! /-/
    ( *-* )

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  • From CrazyPedantic on February 23, 2010
    wow. What a sweet meeting between Harry and his parents. The emotion really came out in this chapter, especially when he was talking to James. He wants his younger self to have things that he never got. Once again a wonderful chapter. Bloody Brilliant!

    Can't wait for the next installment. Seems like a few people are starting to figure out who Harry and Severus really are, things could get messy
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  • From kaasan on February 22, 2010
    Ooh, what wonderful chapters that you have gifted us, your grateful readers! Will the working of the family crest into the basement of the Potter's house change history? Will Voldemort still be able to attack and kill the Potter parents? Inquiring minds want to know!! Keep up the wonderfully stupendous writing!
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  • From ANON - Mona on February 22, 2010
    What can I say, I just love each and every chapter!!!
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  • From CrazyPedantic on February 22, 2010
    Another wonderful chapter...can't wait to see Older Harry interact with his parents. That would be so emotional. They're getting ready for battle, I hope you don't decide to kill anyone off. Also can't wait for Bumbledork's reaction to their fighting and how they will spin the media so dorky doesn't take credit. So love this story, keep going strong. I'm starting to post my stuff, and yup it is fun :)
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  • From gypsy on February 21, 2010
    You're doing great at keeping all the different time lines individual and identifiable. Not an easy task to do - I tried it in one of mine on another site and failed spectacularly! More sex or kink, PLEASE! I'm just an erotica junky at heart! HP/SS are among my fav combos! In general, I like the pace of the story.
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  • From danawarner on February 21, 2010
    Only Dumbledore could accidentally capture Salazar Slytherin and have no clue as to who he is.
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  • From CrazyPedantic on February 21, 2010
    Something I forgot to say before. You are one of three authors, whose stories have given me the guts to post my own meagre offerings to the Harry Potter fandom. So Thankyou :) I hope right now your feeling both really embarrassed and flattered.
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  • From CrazyPedantic on February 21, 2010
    hehehehe Dumbledork is losing it. I hope they get rid of him as much as they want to get rid of Mouldyshorts. Once again another fantastic chapter! I got to read 2 chapters in one night, wonderful. I knew Dumbledork was behind that portkey, I was also thinking that Molly was unaware it was a portkey. Those mirrors have come in very useful, great way to keep track of the old coot :)

    Teddy was adorable, the toddler speak you created for him was very realistic (having spent several hours today trying to decipher it myself). And sixth born...aawwwww so cute. Loved Lucius' reaction to finding out he had a horcrux in his possession. I would need a stiff drink too :) Your Lucius is a much lighter one than in the books. He seems less dark, which makes sense since he was influenced by Mouldyshorts for a shorter period of time. They are definitely changing the future for the better.

    More please?
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  • From CrazyPedantic on February 21, 2010
    Who took Salazar? My bet is on Dumbledore having something to do with his disappearance. Yet another wonderful chapter. Things are starting to come to a head. I really can't wait to find out where you're going with this. Despite my slash dislike, still one of the very best stories I've ever read. Keep on writing this fabulous epic. :)
    Jen
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  • From kaasan on February 21, 2010
    Great chapter, evil cliffie!! One has to wonder if Dumbledore or one of his flunkies could have gotten a hold of Molly's book without her knowledge or is she in on the plan to portkey Becca to where ever Salazar ended up at. Awaiting the next chapter with baited breath!! Keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - dominique1 on February 18, 2010
    so knowwe have harry and sev from the first time line i guess their older selves and the new time line with another set so there will be 3 sev and3 harry's two a couple how cool i s ove this stroy thank you for it we also have three may two fiction of other creature the older and the younger which is real good because there two remus in two dobby's maybe another dobby if he is with the grandfather i ll i can say is your good
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