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Reviews for All's Fair in Love and War

By : FuchsiaScreams
  • From JayneTrazom on September 23, 2009
    hot damn!!
    more please?
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  • From LynnHall on September 22, 2009
    Did Severus pick up on the fact that she refuses to let him into her heart ever again?
    I love your story, I am not sure if I have read the first one or not. I've not been as big in writing reviews as I was in the past for a varity of reasons but I wanted to let you know that you have a fan out there. Keep up the good work.
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  • From Poetlover on September 21, 2009
    Another wonderful chapter! Wow, I find I have to fan myself a bit after that scene. lol Looks like the tension is mounting. Found just one spelling errors (the part were Severus says he can't have his attendant passing out left and right when she's supposed to be doing his bidding. . it had by bidding instead of my bidding. If I'm wrong please forgive me.), but other than that it was excellent chapter. Keep up the excellent work and I'm looking forward to reading the next chapter.
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  • From LadyxEmpire on September 21, 2009
    magnifico! cant wait for your lemons im sure theyre gonna be awesome! what is sev gonna do when she realises he dugged her?? the wrath of the lioness is immanent! beautiful flow to your writing, the muse must be doing her happy dance!
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  • From chrisdavis on September 21, 2009
    ooh, naughty boy slipping potions into her drink and then listening in. Very Slytherin. But what would happen if she found out what he was up too?
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  • From QueenRuby on September 21, 2009
    I'm actually finding this very enjoyable. about the only thing I can say is there were a couple of phrases that didn't flow quiet right and I had to reread them. though longer chapters would also be good. Keep writing and yes I know how no reviews can make an auther feel.
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  • From Amethystique on September 21, 2009
    More please? Poor Severus, troubled, depraved, denied & horny! x
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  • From Poetlover on September 20, 2009
    Another wonderful chapter! In my mind I could see the interaction Severus was having with those women, and I had to laugh. I enjoyed reading this chapter very much. Looks like Severus is going to be as stubborn as ever. lol I look forward to reading what will happen next. Keep up the excellent work.
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  • From Lauriurix on September 20, 2009
    I've been reading ur story but just havent commented on it

    i really like it!
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  • From lioness4391 on September 20, 2009
    Yes you should continue writing please. I enjoy reading and would like to find out how this relationship unfolds. Thank you for the story.
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  • From Lunajenn on September 20, 2009
    I am enjoying this...keep it coming!!
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  • From LadyxEmpire on September 19, 2009
    don't be discouraged! youre doing great, you just gotta give the muse a fighting chance! im definately excited to see where you take this story, especially with the edition of the last chapter.youre keeping the characters believable and im really excited to see where you take them :D
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  • From gemmadandy on September 19, 2009
    I'm totally in love with this story already. Please, Please, Please keep going!!
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  • From ElisaIreland on September 19, 2009
    Excellent story so far, my dear! Do keep up the good work. And don't worry about reviews. While it's wonderful to recieve them, they aren't the most important thing abour writing. As long as YOU'RE satisfied, you needn't worry about others.
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  • From wolfen18 on September 19, 2009
    It's a fair story so far. Although your chapters are a little short. Oh, and begging for comments with the veiled suggestion that you might not continue because of the lack of them is lame.
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