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Reviews for Somewhere in the Middle

By : iampast1
  • From voraciousreader on September 20, 2009
    I didn't think the chapter was boring, it had essential information neccessary to create the other side of the events mentioned. Draco's fit of verbal overflow was funny, as well; I now have the image of him with a big bread roll in his mouth, like and voer-stuffed chipmunk! LOL.
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  • From kazfeist on September 17, 2009
    Again, a very engrossing third chapter! Loved the byplay between Goyle and Draco. You've made him smarter than the books, and I'm glad. :D
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  • From kazfeist on September 17, 2009
    Really good, so far! I just had to reduce the font size on the second chapter so I could read each line all in one go. I remember a similar story, showing Riddle in a good light, but I think either Hermione or Harry was supposedly related to him and he had a sister who ended up a Professor at Hogwarts. I'm looking forward to more of this! :D
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  • From mizzapples on September 17, 2009
    hey, I reallly love your writting style it is soo good, and your story is so interesting. Hurry up and post the next chapter please
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  • From margaritama on September 16, 2009
    wow - evil order and annoying Ron....I would LOVE for Draco to get a hold of him. Can't wait to see how you're going to turn this on its head.....
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  • From ANON - VoraciousReader on September 16, 2009
    Nice chapter. I wonder if Albus is going to realize how (er) riddled with defectors the Order is? Sorry about the pun, but I couldn't resist. I can't wait to see the explanation of the familial relationships.
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  • From ANON - kimbclar on September 15, 2009
    This is excellent so far! I'm on the edge of my seat waiting to find out what happens next.
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  • From ANON - al.beit on September 15, 2009
    i like how you've portayed the 'dark side' so far, as people who have family and friends to fight for rather than just as killing machines. Has remus defected from the order? Love the story, keep it up! :)
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  • From margaritama on September 15, 2009
    First off, thank you for the compliment....my muse has been laying low for a bit but this story has re-energized me. I LOVED the fighting sequence. I think you handled the back and forth POVs so wonderfully. Really well done so congrats. I can't wait for more. My fave line "you have alot of muscles." LOL

    PS: is Harry dead? What's up with this?
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  • From ancheto on September 15, 2009
    this is great story! so unique and intriguing!
    love your line about draco as a cover model mmmmmm haha
    please continue!
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  • From readingwoman777 on September 15, 2009
    I love it! The contrast between the beginning of this chapter with the tension of the chase, compared to the really hilarious section involving Hermione's underwear and Draco's eligibility as a model for a bodice-ripper romance series... I do enjoy comic relief. On relationships, guess I'm going to have to print both chapters & pull out the highlighter. Also, it is just WILD to have the good guys & bad guys totally reversed, with Dumbledore now apparently bad-guy-in-chief. Where does Harry come into this? Oh, keep it up.
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  • From ANON - VoraciousReader on September 14, 2009
    A very exciting beginning! i am impatient to find out where you will go with this.
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  • From boicrazygirl15 on September 14, 2009
    You were wonderful :P Dont wrry i got it now, im such a blonde sometimes i swear. :]
    I can hardly wait for the next chapter, i love how draco is so forward. Oh an that goyles in this!
    He was my favorite of the malfoy lackys lol.

    Keep up the good wrk darling :] update. :D
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  • From margaritama on September 13, 2009
    AMAZING -- hell yes continue...brilliant

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  • From living4bliss on September 13, 2009
    OMG are you kidding me with the question!!! You have to continue! You can't leave a cliff hanger! I need to know what happens next!
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