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Reviews for Confusion And Obsession

By : jcschaefer
  • From kazfeist on October 28, 2009
    A very nice ending. I was actually expecting to read that they eloped because Luna was already pregnant. So yu surprised me. :D
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  • From thelovelylela on October 28, 2009
    Loved it. Read it through each post and it was great. Good job! Love, Tem
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 26, 2009
    That was a beautiful, original, and unusal story with twists and turns right up to the very end. I loved it. Good on you for sharing such a wonderful tale. I hope to be reading more of your work in the future. :)
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  • From boicrazygirl15 on October 25, 2009
    Now that was an absolutely ahmazing story! I loved every bit of it, so much drama lol

    perfect ending. :]
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  • From ANON - Tanya on October 25, 2009
    Loved this story :) totally worth reading :)
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  • From mlui on October 25, 2009
    23, 24 & End: A very fitting end. It's nice of Harry and Luna to adopt Pansy and Ron's child. At least, he would grow to be loved. And the nerve of Parkinson! He's the one who disowned his daughter! Anyways, great chapters/story! =D
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  • From mlui on October 22, 2009
    21-22: Good riddance to them all! Great chapters and I can't wait to see what happens next! I'm glad the baby's okay. =D
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  • From torigonzales on October 18, 2009
    update soooooon!!!!!! please!!!!!!!!!
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  • From lemonade8 on October 08, 2009
    I thought I would let you know that it's spelled "Confusion" and not "Confussion". I would have done this privately, but your email was hidden. Just trying to help.
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  • From ANON - Alleyneko on October 06, 2009
    wow I must say I like this story. Its very different to most I've read, although I think draco is just a tad bit OOC for my taste it is still a wonderful story. hope you update soon!
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 04, 2009
    Well it certainly sounds like justice has been done but the story's not over yet. Of course there's a wedding to look forward to, but I'm not sure how smoothly everything will go. Well done!
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  • From smmz79 on October 04, 2009
    wow that was an interesting chap... i am glad that the weasleys did not get off and i think it is funny that ginny had a little outburst like that... i am glad that harry and luna got together i think that is so sweet
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  • From dragongirl on October 01, 2009
    Twins how wonderfull... But I feel this is not over yet .. I mean the danger for these tow.. more please
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  • From ExperimentalMe on September 30, 2009
    I'm enjoying your story. please continue.
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  • From dixiecharmer on September 30, 2009
    This is an interesting story, I have a couple of issues with the story. One issue I have is Pansy calling Draco, "Drake". I know several writers have used this nickname. A Drake is a male duck. I can not see Draco, who would know his name means dragon allowing any one to call him a duck. I am aware that several writers also try to give Hermione nicknames, but JK Rowlings never had any one call Hermione by anything but her full name.

    The second issue I have is Hermione would still think of herself as "Hermione" as this is the name she has thought of herself for 17 years. She would have problems with adjusting to her change of status. She would still remember how the Slythern boys treated her at Hogwarts, and would be slow to forget. Her change of blood status would not cause her to trust them, do to the discrimination she suffered from at Hogwarts.

    Ron would be an eye opener but then she would start to think of him like she does most of the other pureblood. Even though healers can use potions and charms to heal broken bones, the bruises and swelling still takes time to heal. She would still suffer physical and emotional pain from her being beaten. This would be especially rough as it came from someone she trusted.

    Blaise is not a dark Italian. JK Rowlings discribes him as A"tall black boy with high cheekbones and long, slanting eyes." He is of Italian and African ancestry. His mother is described as A "famously beautiful witch" who "married seven times." Each of her wealthy husbands died a mysterious death, leaving her a lot of gold. There for if Hermione is Blaise's twin sister she would be of the same ancestry. With a question about i how her father died, and would she trust such a mom?

    If her "adopted" mother is a witch and married a squib she would not have had to lose her magic, she could only not practice magic in front of muggles. It was Snape's father that was a muggle, but Snape was aware of his background. He knew he was a half-blood, and was going to attend Hogwarts. Hermiones "adopted" parents would have known Hermione would be going to Hogwarts. They would have been aware that the odds would have been high that Hermione could have been sorted in to Ravenclaw due to her intelligence or Slytherin due to family back ground. We know from the book that the sorting Hat debated between Ravenclaw and Gryffindor for Hermione and she selected Gryffindor. Yes, twins and family members do not always go into the same house. I question that the sorting hat would have been fooled by a glamor spell as it looks at the essence of the person.

    Your story is a fun read and I know you are not following cannon. You have shown creative and I hope that you continue writing. Please do not regard this as a flame. I hope I have given you some things to consider for your next story, after you finish this one,
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