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Reviews for Who\'s your lover?

By : Blaubeergeist
  • From ANON - Twiggz on October 13, 2015
    T.T why'd you stop this?
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  • From Elvira on November 14, 2009
    Do I even have to say this. Update!
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  • From HunterJumperLuvr on October 28, 2009
    I usually don't review on-going stories...but I wanted to ask you if you needed a beta/proofreader. I'm very good at English, and would love to help...so if you want me to beta, or have any questions, just give me an email (it should be on my profile)

    Good Luck with the story,
    Hunter
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  • From ANON - Sara on October 03, 2009
    I think this was a cool story with and interesting way of misleading snape. thanks for writing it I hope you update it agian soon
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  • From BlueTribalRose on October 02, 2009
    I really am enjoying this. Had a few twists already. Please keep it up. Can't wait til the next chapters. Please update soon.
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  • From ANON - nari-chan on September 26, 2009
    vary good i cant wait to read the next chapter :)
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  • From Traybell on September 25, 2009
    Nice. Poor Snape a bit jealous and thinks Harry doesn't like him. Harry thinking Snape hates him. look forward to how things unfold for them.
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  • From ANON - S.S on September 25, 2009
    Brilliant story will snape find out soon
    Can't wait for more
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  • From ANON - BVB on September 25, 2009
    Keeping Harry's feelings for Snape a secret for that long was a nice touch, but i think you rushed Snape's feelings a bit.
    Great story so far, I loved that part with Harry and Draco. Poor Harry.

    Keep going, I really like it.
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  • From Veracityrules on September 25, 2009
    Good little story. It can be a little difficult to follow whose P.O.V is being represented but I imagine with the aid of a beta reader this will soon be cleared up. I intend to keep reading as it has promise.

    ;)
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  • From ANON - Word_Slave on September 24, 2009
    I think you did a good job and am looking forward to more. Thankyou
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  • From AnnaLouise on September 24, 2009
    I have to say, for somebody whose first language is not english, your story is very readable. I think the plot could turn out to be rather delicious, and I'm looking forward to seeing where you might take this.

    Poor Severus. I can just imagine what would be going through his mind each day as he has to teach Harry. I wouldn't mind seeing some interaction and sweet scheming from his friends. Hermione in particular is fun to play with. I'm sure she would be happy to do a little meddling in Harry's affairs. ;o)

    One note though, you may find having a beta-reader helpful. I know some people have difficulty with them, but even just having somebody to fix any grammar mistakes you might miss would be a good thing.

    : )




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  • From someonenotme on September 24, 2009
    I like this so far- your storyline and characterizations are interesting, but you REALLY need a beta-reader. Your grammar and punctuation are atrocious. Don't be discouraged, though - I do look forward to your next chapter. :0)
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  • From ANON - LoveLee on September 24, 2009
    Very interesting, would love to see where this is going.
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