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Reviews for My Past Will Always Catch Up

By : Talana
  • From mrequecky on October 04, 2009
    Liked a lot >D
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  • From torikillyou on October 04, 2009
    Pain tolerance? Oh my, oh my! That does sound scrumptious. Good chapter, I like the way you played Harry to not give a shit... It seems to be becoming all the more promising. Hmmm can't wait till next chapter :)



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  • From mrequecky on October 01, 2009
    Wow, loved this! I like Harry's POV just fine :D maybe Voldi's view can be interesting sometimes though...
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  • From Zirconium on September 30, 2009
    Stick with Harry's POV please. It really is working fine for the story, and it will avoid all those jarring changes of POV that seem to happen in so many other stories.

    In my opinion, multiple POV's work best when writing in the third person. For a first person narrative it is often better to just stick to one person.
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  • From Dhalim on September 30, 2009
    lol >< interesting twist. 'wonder how long Harry will be able to keep up the act XD cant wait for your next update!
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 30, 2009
    He hoodwinked old Voldie. Well played, Harry, well played. Heeheehee I love Harry/Voldemort stories and this one is fixing up to be a nice one. Yay! I'm so excited!
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  • From knj4k4 on September 29, 2009
    Harry POv seems to be working for you I hardly even noticed that it was in first person. I would only switch to third if you really need to or if your muse gives up and you need a new angle.
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  • From Dhalim on September 28, 2009
    interesting ^^ i like it so far- looking forward to the next update!
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  • From mrequecky on September 28, 2009
    Wow love this a lot! Because you mentioned you will update infrequently, could you mail me, when you update again to a[dot]schmitter[at]web[dot]de ??? Loved a lot!
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  • From angelwarrior1 on September 28, 2009
    Very interesting so far. I hope you decide to continue it it. I wonder who just caught Harry?

    Angelwarrior1
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  • From MrGalion on September 27, 2009
    Interesting... I love the firstperson explanations.
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