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Reviews for Wishing For Darkness

By : sephsdaughter
  • From ANON - tamikolee on October 10, 2009
    I love your story. There is so much in it though, I am not sure I can keep up, but I trust that it will all be clear in the end. I can't wait for you to update. Thankyou.
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  • From EarlyDawn on October 08, 2009
    AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE IT!! The parts of the story are original which I LOVE, but I also love the parts that are not so original. The way in which you present them is capitavating. Can't wait for more!!
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  • From DestinyDragon on October 07, 2009
    I love this story!!!! Please update soon.
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  • From kogaluver on October 07, 2009
    This fic is so confusing and so full of plot holes that I don't even know where to begin with questions. You jump around the story way too much introducing scenes and scenarios and OC's and situations that only you problably understand fully. Where I am sure that you have readers who don't care about how easily a story flows, I do. I just can't keep up. Maybe it's just my bad, lol. I realize that this is your first story so I would encourage you to continue. If you were to add more detail to your scenes and finish one idea before moving on to something entirely new in the plot, that would be helpful. Just a suggestion. Please take this as helpful critiquing and not a flame, okay.
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  • From mrequecky on October 07, 2009
    yay, yay, yay, love and want more!!!
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  • From on October 06, 2009
    Interesting beginning! I hope to see more soon!

    -TianaMae
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  • From on October 06, 2009
    oooooooooo, excellent start!!!!
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