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Reviews for Wishing For Darkness

By : sephsdaughter
  • From itachisgirlfriend23 on May 23, 2017

    I really hope that you are still updating this story it is phenomenal.


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  • From horsesrules on October 19, 2013
    write more its really good
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  • From angelicangel on November 04, 2010
    more please!!!
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  • From ANON - justmine25 on May 16, 2010
    this is the 1st time I'm reading your story and I am finding it interesting I usually dont go for Harry evil on the same side as voldermort type thing but your spin is believable , cant wait for more I am interested in seeing how Draco and harrys budding relationship develope , when Blaise and Ginny will get together and how Harry will stay out of the headmaster's clutches.
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  • From mrequecky on May 02, 2010
    Loved! Just keep 'em coming :D
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  • From NessaC on May 02, 2010
    Hi there, discovered this today, and I am liking it immensely!! Although I did find the switch from Harry-at-the-Dursley's to Harrison etc. very abrupt. He doesn't seem to be confused as much as I expected he would be at discovering he is a completely different person than who he thought he was. Might be worth a revision at some point :) Also feel that a bit more explanation about the Weasleys vs. Ginny might be needed, I was a bit confused at their behavior when they first appear in Ragnarok's office.

    Hope you don't mind my pointing these things out, thought you might want this kind of feedback :)
    Loving the storyline!!

    ~Spiritxx
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  • From thrnbrooke on April 27, 2010
    Sooo need chapter 11! Why are they both sooo tired?
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  • From ANON - Layla on April 27, 2010
    I do so love your story, and yes I will wait as long as I have to in order to find out what will happen next. I love this new Harry and how Draco is able to accept him. Harry needs it. I am glad that he has his old friend Eiri back. I am curious to see what will develop between Harry and Vlad. Why do I have this funny feeling that Fawkes is going to be on Harry's side soon. Please continue when you can. Thank you for a wonderful read.
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  • From ANON - nosyrosie16 on April 25, 2010
    PLEASE UDPATE SOON!! REALLY WOULD LIKE TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT WITH VOLDIE AND HARRY?! AND HARRY AND DRACO?! UPDATE SOON PLEASE!!
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  • From mjmusiclover on March 13, 2010
    very beautifully done i absoloutely love it :D
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  • From slytherinslave on March 13, 2010
    aww i love it.. please continue this fic
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  • From HeartStar on March 11, 2010
    very nice very very nicve I would love to read more just to see where you take this,
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  • From stray523 on March 10, 2010
    I like your story so far, but I think you try to have too many mysteries going on at once. Have you ever heard the expression about too many cooks spoiling the soup? Well, it's kinda like that. It doesn't make the story bad, per se, just confusing and a bit hard to keep up with. I'm not sure what kinds of creature blood Harry has in him, but I'm sure one of them is Veela and another is Fae of some sort and I suspect Vampire as well. You said five though and I can't figure out the other two. My other complaint, besides there being too much going on at once, is that you don't seem to give adequate background on anything, like telling what the other creatures are (Eiri, Nastusia, Harry's rapist). It seems you're overdoing it trying to pack as many things into the story as you can, but never enough of anything to make things clear or even entirely coherent. Maybe some more detail about what's going on? Or try to clarify some of what you've already written before you try to pile on anymore surprises? Your spelling and grammar are almost perfect though.
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  • From ANON - raineynight on November 22, 2009
    Hey, would you please email me at raineynight713@gmail.com when you update again? I think your story is amazing! =D
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  • From thrnbrooke on October 14, 2009
    Sooooo need chapter 10!!!
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