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From ANON - SP777 on December 22, 2009
about #25.....

You know, I'm starting to like the fact Severus is truly
seeing Harry as 'his SON'.

So how long will it be until Harry sees Severus as 'his father'?

In canon, is Severus' father dead? I can't remember.
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From ANON - ladyicondraco on December 22, 2009
Very deep and beautiful.

I find myself thinking from Snape's perspective in this story, which is odd for me. I was just as surprised as he was that Harry didn't consider him someone to check with regarding who to tell what to.

I'd really like to see how Dumbledore reacts to Harry now that Snape has given him a firm kick in the rear.
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From Dezra on December 21, 2009
Finally! I was getting somewhat irritated at this story because everyone expected Harry to change his attitude and outlook but neither Snape nor Draco were changing theirs. I'm glad that Harry confronted Snape about his attitude and how it needed to change. How can Snape expect Harry to think of him as family if he still looks at Harry with derision and contempt? Who would want to be around that?
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From thrnbrooke on December 20, 2009
Soooo need chapter 25!!!
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From ANON - MewMew2 on December 20, 2009
Excellent job. I throughly enjoyed the mental image invoked when this line was read "And as the boy leaned closer, Severus suffered a sudden, dizzying revelation: he was leaning over a potions cauldron and instructing a son of his blood." This could be used to prompt a drabble/one-shot based on the Concept of Serverus' son perhaps? Just a thought. Thank you for updating once more.
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From ANON - ladyicondraco on December 19, 2009
"Severus restrained his wrath with the ease of long experience
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From ANON - k lave demo on December 19, 2009
yes progress. especially emjoying how sev notices things bout harry that relate back to him and lily. do you think that if harry and sev had started towards a better relationship before harry found out about his parentage that he might have been more welcoming of the idea or withdraw out of fear of losing the new less hostile relationship? will severus pick up on the strength of emotions between the two boys before they do? as always i love the plot and mosochistically enjoy the knot of emotions caused by your danged cliffhangers. happily awaiting the next update. viven la vida loca!
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From ANON - yenbd on December 19, 2009
poor harry. he shouldnt have to suffer anymore. having snape as a father makes that impossible. harrys right he is the adult.
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From ANON - SP777 on December 19, 2009
about #24...

I just had a 'moment' when I read this..or should I say a
thought JUST came to me! :-D

How about this for a scene...Severus is instructing Harry
in whatever situation you may have them in and Harry does
something that's COMPLETELY makes Severus exasperated and
THE words come out of his mouth, "You're just like your mother!"

...which, of course, pleases Harry to no end!

I don't know about you, but I got that a couple of times from
my mother. It's like a Universal phrase that a parent HAS to
say at one point or another.

Also, I like the fact that Severus IS trying with Harry, NOW
if only Harry will let his guard down an inch or two.
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From ANON - SP777 on December 16, 2009
about #23...

1. Damn, when Severus gets through speaking, his words leave you
cut open with LOTS of wounds, doesn't he? :-)

2.
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From ANON - ladyicondraco on December 16, 2009
At the end of every chapter I think that you can't get better than this, and can't make the emotions more real, or that you are about to fall into some cliche or overused situation. I am wrong every time. This is the most creative and inventive HP story I have ever read. You bring the characters to logical and in character places that I've never seen anyone else do, and I just have to wonder WHY no one else has thought of it, cause it makes so much sense. Okay, I think that I am done fangirling all over you.
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From serenagold on December 16, 2009
Excellent chapter. This is like the turning point for their whole relationship.
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From ANON - lauren on December 16, 2009
Aw that last scene made me squirm in my seat, it was so uncomfortable for poor Harry!! Very well done!

Also, loved the war of words with Sev & Albus.

great job!
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From thrnbrooke on December 15, 2009
Soooo need chapter 24!!! It's a start! I like how Harry was able to fall asleep with Severus guarding him and how Severus was hoarding his secrets of Harry.
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From ANON - Mia on December 15, 2009
Because of your answer to me at the end of chapter 23, I realised that you have two reviewers named Mia. Odd, that. I'm the one that puts the stupid squiggle before my name. Mostly I praise and don't leave much in the way of questions. I'll be sure to differentiate for you now.

~ the other Mia
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