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Reviews for Practicing Liars

By : Lomonaaeren
  • From ANON - Mia on December 15, 2009
    I can only shake my head at Dumbledore. I can't even hate him. Well, maybe if I tried. I do love seeing him notched and bruised though. Severus, though...him I want to buy a beer for. He was amazing. I love it all. Thank you love. Thank you.

    Will Draco and Harry become physically involved in this story?

    ~Mia
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  • From ANON - Anony on December 15, 2009
    What happend to the bloodline curse? It was acting up a lot a few chapters back, then it just stopped. Did I miss something, or is that later on in the story?
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  • From ANON - k lave demo on December 15, 2009
    this has become a three course meal the plots so good. it's sbout time dumbledore got a tongue-lashing as well as a bit of a revelation. i'm glad you did what rowling did which was show that dumbledore had his faults but wasn't a bad or evil man. i'm also glad that sev didn't turn hypocrite. his words whould have been shallow if he didn't face harry. the enjoyable knot of emotions has passed into contentment but knowing you it'll probably be back soon. i look forward to it. as always i love ur work and persephone's folly was great i hope it has a sequel. til next time. viven la vida loca.
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  • From ANON - MewMew2 on December 15, 2009
    Thanks for updating once again. 'Watch Dog Snape, lupine companion extrodinare, see his famous schnoz in action as he sniffs out spies, and intruders.' This came to mind as I read the last scene, a quasi-advertisement for a Snape watchdog. In any case, great job as usual I really like seeing a non omnipotent Albus sometimes, wily manipulative old man.
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  • From thrnbrooke on December 13, 2009
    Soooo need chapter 23!!! Severus is going to rip Albus a new one!
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  • From ANON - SP777 on December 13, 2009
    Excuse me if my thoughts seem scattered [than usual], I was
    watching the Jackson 5 special for 40 mins. before I came
    back to review..
    ********************
    about #22...

    'A Conversation Harry Doesn't WANT to Have..' now THAT'S an
    understatement!

    Though I have to admit the image of strangulation of one
    Saviour is having more and more of appeal to me...and the
    restraint Severus is showing is commendable.

    I'd give him an Order of Merlin just for that!

    Now, you gotta admit that Harry seems to have slipped into
    a dimension of his own making, I almost expect him to start
    banging his head against a wall at any given moment, when he
    gets into the same vicinity with Severus and TRIES to divert
    his attention from the main subject.

    I hope you give us a breakthrough soon! I'm starting to get
    nervous about Harry's mental state.

    By the way, how do you keep these 2 stories separate in your head?
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  • From ANON - MewMew2 on December 13, 2009
    Thank you for updating once more. I thoroughly enjoyed the intensity of this chapter and the Harry's epic explosion into action. I noticed that in either this chapter or the last you said in one line "Potter wondered how the boy, his son was doing" when it should have been "Snape wondered". Not trying to nitpick, just picked up on it. Excellent job, I eagerly await the next installment.
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  • From someonenotme on December 13, 2009
    I like!! Much goodness!!
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  • From ANON - mucunagos on December 13, 2009
    Oooh, that was intense...Do not concur with Severus :things could have gone worse. I don`t know what would have happened in the heat of the battle without Draco.
    Well at least the confrontation allowed Harry to blow off some steam. It`s only so much one can endure without exploding.
    Both him and Severus need a reality check in considering each other, and Draco will fill the paper of the proverbial bridge. Lucky him!
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  • From BellaNoir23 on December 13, 2009
    I dont know why but I have the feeling that by the time Harry lets Snape into his life it will be too late and one of them will be dead morel than likely Snape. I understand why Harry is so reluctent to let Snape in, I guess the mushy part of me hates to see people struggle lol. Anyways great chapter.
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  • From lipstick3516 on December 13, 2009
    Thanks!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - LoveLee on December 13, 2009
    I've read a couple of your stories now and love the way you write your characters. You have this beautiful ability to transform your characters from the beginning to the end of the story, andI find each of your characters very easy to connect to as a reader.
    This is another amazing piece of work, I look forward to the updates.
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  • From ANON - k lave demo on December 12, 2009
    mmm you're right my emotions are still in knots and it's just as agonizingly delicious as before. this plot has got thrills going down my spine and the simmering curiosity has flamed into a agonizingly delicious desperation to KNOW what's going to hapeen next. seriosuly the anticipation has got my body twitching almost like someone who is expecting to go into battle soon. the characters and they're emotions were so well though out and the interaction between them and how harry saw how his actions were affecting draco lowered his defenses. those very same defenses that keep sev out may be lowered enough for him to stat making their relationship progress forwards. i feel so bad for severus though but i wonder f letting someone else run interference will really help. sincerely looking forward to a tongue thrashing from sev towards albu. he so deserves it this time. thank you for the pleasurable read. viven la vida...
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  • From ANON - Mia on December 12, 2009
    SO very overwhelming. I kind of wonder just what it would take for Harry to accept the truth about Snape. He was much more accepting of Black. I am as in love with this story as ever. Always wanting more. Makes me feel like I have something akin to an eating dissorder with how much I want to devour this.

    ~Mia
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  • From tiggator on December 12, 2009
    Loving this story (like so many others you have written). Keep up the great work. Very clever plot. :)
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