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Reviews for Practicing Liars

By : Lomonaaeren
  • From ANON - heyyou on December 11, 2009
    Help! Help! I've been hooked by Lomonaaeren and I can't get away. It's so pretty and hypnotic, though...Do I want to escape from this entrancing storyteller's grasp? Hmmm...I think I like it here...so much to keep one entertained...
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  • From ANON - mucunagos on December 11, 2009
    P.S.
    Am I the only one that thinks it`s all right for H to be stubborn and independent considering the circumstances?
    I feel sooo lonely...
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  • From ANON - mucunagos on December 11, 2009
    Oh my!
    Well... let`s just say I will feel sorry for Dumbledore when Severus confronts him.
    NOT AT ALL!
    Plenty of chocolate cookies for the inspired writer.
    Mia
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  • From thrnbrooke on December 11, 2009
    Soooo need chapter 22!!!
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  • From ANON - SP777 on December 10, 2009
    about #21...

    First of all, loved the chapter title..for a second you had me
    thinking of boxing [not dueling]. :-)

    Second, you, my dear...sweet...kind...WONDERful...author, are
    starting to frustrate me. As I got halfway through the
    chapter I was like 'how stubborn can ONE boy be???'

    I wanted to take a stick and beat the hard-headed child
    upside the head!

    Admit it, you're going to stretch this out until your readers
    decide to form a lynch mob. :-)

    By the way, I hope Severus doesn't verbally 'hurt' Albus TOO bad...
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  • From ANON - tigermisse on December 10, 2009
    Oh thank God the secrets out. Loved the ch.
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  • From ANON - lauren on December 10, 2009
    I absolutely love this story.
    Part of me wants harry to accept Sev but another part of me wants Severus to suffer more for being a jerk.

    Thanks for writing, you have a way with words that is a joy to read.

    Cheers,
    L
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  • From ANON - myniephoenix on December 10, 2009
    I look forward to every update you have. I check the site for it. Why? Because I am truely dependant on it. please update soon.
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  • From ANON - Mia on December 10, 2009
    I adore this story. I'm not sure why I favor it above the others, but I do. I love this so very much. Thank you.

    ~Mia
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  • From serenagold on December 10, 2009
    Snape may have gotten his answers, but at what cost? He just set back the trust factor for both himself and Draco. Now Harry's going to reject both of them. Completely.

    You know, for all his careful, patient maneuvering and intelligence, Snape can be a real short-sighted and impatient idiot sometimes.


    Keep up the great work!
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  • From ANON - Maria on December 09, 2009
    Protective!Snape is adorable! *has had a bit of a crush on Snape since the first book*

    I love this story :D and I'm glad it's you who're writing this; I don't think any other fanfiction writer could do as well as you.

    Also, do you do requests? :D I'd really like to read a "Harry turns werewolf with Remus or Fenrir as his mate"-fic written with your words. That would be so amazing!
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  • From ANON - Jessy Mel on December 09, 2009
    The horocrux is already gone, isn't it? Harry felt pain in his scar and he was connected with Draco when his mark was melting away. It has to be gone, I can't bare to loose Harry! Not now when he's finally and slowly, albeist very reluctantly, starts to realize Snape isn't the bad guy he thought he was! Or at least he's about to be proven wrong.
    I must admit this particular story is currently my all time favourite. You capture the characters in such a believable way and your plot is so well developed! Draco is a bit out of character, but that is to be expected, as we didn't get to know him that well in the books, which leaves space for imagination. Amazing work!
    I can not wait for the next chapter!

    And it's quite refreshing to read a story by a talented author who put such thought into each and every word. Thank you for writing this.
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  • From ANON - k lave demo on December 09, 2009
    agghhh! u've got me so mixed up. i'm happy that Snape found out and is willing to help harry and yet i'm irritated because harry is so stubborn. it's.. aggh. it's just that beautifully written and tortorously suspenseful and only put together so wonderfully that i can't wait for more. the interactions are so realistic it's like a well written drama that leaves a person hanging. and it'll be three days before we get an update. that used to be a blessing but now it's an agonizing (but so worth the wait) curse. which makes this so much fun. til next time! arigatou gozaimasu!
    (side note: i understand how u could see them as creepy but i hope u didn't take it as a liking for shouta cause that really does squick me.)
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  • From ANON - Pilly on December 09, 2009
    Oh Merlin! Poor Harry! You are a fan of happy endings, right? Right????? This is amazing plot line, but seriously evil, even if it was needed to solve the Voldemort problem. And it's quite the amazing way of putting Snape into action, as the thought of loosing the son he's never gotten the chance to know, just after finding out, is sure to make him ignore his problems with the past and start helping Harry instead. Really though, please don't kill Harry, at least not permanently. Hmm... You stick to some of the important details of the books, so I'll hope he only dies temporarily as in the book. This is brilliant though.
    Still, sorry for my English ^^;

    Update soon! (Three days feels like three decades when one is waiting for something so brilliant!)


    Also, a little question; Where you wrote "As Potter thought he was alone, Potter wondered again what sort of life this boy had led, to make him so...." it's suposed to be "As Potter thought he was alone, Snape wondered again what sort of life this boy had led, to make him so...", right? :)

    Looking anxiously forward to the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - mucunagos on December 08, 2009
    I love Harry Potter. While I very much enjoyed the books and found most of the caracters endearing (even the villans)I must confess the reason I ventured into fanfiction is one scruffy looking, temperamental, miopic child with a penchant for trouble.
    There is one moment that defines Harry for me. The "I open at the close" moment. He is NOT a perfect person. Too many things contribute into making him as far from perfect as anybody can be. But while everybody has redeeming qualities, as he steps into the Forbidden Forrest, his I can only call sublime. Many took chances with their lives, spying, fighting, madly searching for horcruxes, but only Harry and Lily Potter offered their lives so others could live knowing there is no escape. Lily did it for her son, in the heat of the moment.
    So..what I am trying to say is:
    Thank you for capturing in your stories both the imperfection and the sublime of the caracter I love.
    Mia
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