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Reviews for Practicing Liars

By : Lomonaaeren
  • From ANON - jan on October 14, 2009
    Snape is going to feel like crap after everything comes to light. I can't wait for that day. I'm feeling the same frustration I felt when I read the book. It's just so unfair how he treats him, on top of being treated like dirt w/ the fat pigs. I'd like for Harry to have some happy ending too, that's why I love reading fanfiction.
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  • From ANON - paigeey07 on October 14, 2009
    I'm very excited for the next chapter!!
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  • From xmenfreak119 on October 14, 2009
    More! *looks at and tries to see if you're typing up more to this story* Is that m...no...no, sorry, I thought I saw more to the story. Darn. Hurry up please!?!?
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  • From callistianstar on October 13, 2009
    This is definitely different, like your Phoneix story, just something I wouldn't have expected. By pre-slash, what do you mean? Just that Harry and Draco will be good friends? Because of the story, I keep superimposing other stories onto this, but you've dodged most of the way they revealed things, and you've kept it different/original. Nice job so far. Is Draco not going to be given the command to kill Dumbledore in this universe?
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  • From ANON - Tree802 on October 12, 2009
    Ahhhhh.....the plot is laid out! This is gonna be a long one, huh? Poor Draco...I'm interested to know how things change.
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 12, 2009
    Hmm... how could Harry conceal his knowledge during Occlumency lessons, I wonder?

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  • From ANON - SP777 on October 12, 2009
    PS...thank you for reminding me where the word 'Severitus' came from,
    because I truly forgot, until you explained it.
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  • From ANON - SP777 on October 12, 2009
    about #2...

    1. Help me out here...I didn't read all of HBP, so in the beginning
    of the chapter when Prof. Snape was helping Albus was that a scene
    that happened in the book or was it an elaboration on your part?

    2. You know, I was going to say that sometimes children favor the
    mother's side than the father's, so...COULD Harry, visually, have
    some features from Lilly's side of the family that he doesn't know
    about OR is he REALLY starting to favor the Snape side and it isn't
    his OVERactive imagination?

    Of course, I know the answer, BUT....gotta ask.
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  • From ANON - k lave demo on October 11, 2009
    i understand. what i meant to say was that i just disagreed with Harry's tearing the letter. i can't hope but feel he'll regret it in the future. as for SNape i think he would make a competent father. not the most outwardly loving or emotional but capable of being a good father. i honestly have no clue how you're going to go about obtaining your resolution which is unusual because i can usually guess the direction a story will go or pinpoint an outline of key events that are most likely going to occur. with u, however, nothing. i'm glad. i love a story that can throw me off and is hard to get a good grasp of what will happen. like a mystery.
    keepin me hooked. viva la vida!
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  • From ANON - paigeey07 on October 11, 2009
    I wonder what 'diseases' snape has... I guess I'll have to wait and find out. :)
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  • From alma on October 10, 2009
    Ooh, I can't wait for more!
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  • From ANON - SaintLaithche on October 10, 2009
    I really love this first chapter. This has been done many times before, but if I trust anyone to have an original plot, it's you lomonaaeren.
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  • From ANON - sable_silverrain on October 10, 2009
    I like this. It actually sounds pretty original to me, maybe because of the lack of WELL-WRITTEN Severitus stories I've found thus far. I'd like to read more, so please, do continue.
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  • From stargirl77 on October 09, 2009
    I think you really have a good thing started here and hope you continue it. I'm really interested to see how Snape finds out about this and what his reaction will be. Keep the chapters coming!
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  • From danawarner on October 09, 2009
    I'm surprised Lily didn't charm Snape's letter to be indestructible
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