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Reviews for Practicing Liars

By : Lomonaaeren
  • From koki on February 28, 2010
    Thank god!! was siting tense thinking harry died!!
    And i so want to kick weasleys head in!! stupid ginger lanky annoying......person.
    And Hermione is meant to be the brightest witch of their generation? Seems a bit thick to me.
    Still good though.
    x
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  • From ANON - KadyRae on February 25, 2010
    Yes, I suppose it is what he feels he has to do... But damn, it sure is irritating. Love the plot twist! totally wasnt expecting it, despite it being such a Dumbledore thing to do. YAY!
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  • From ANON - mariahs_fantasy on February 25, 2010
    great chapter. to be honest, i didn't put too much stock in dumbledore's riddle, so it was nice to finally figure out what that old coot was talking about lol. also, i'm sure you answered this before, but will there be slash in the story? i only ask because it seems like their feelings are gradually escalating, and they will want to experience it at a special time, and i don't know if they would prefer to do that before/after the climactic battle. also...

    you were Meander?!? i LOVED "Learning Life Over" from start to finish, it was one of the first novel-length stories I bothered giving a chance (usually one-shot preference) and absolutely adored. i guess i should have made a bit of a connection (i might have did!), but, like you said, you were figuring out your writing style, and it seems a bit different from your work now. in fact, thinking about the author name, 'Meander' was an apt choice for that period of discovery, wasn't it? :)

    can't wait to get updates of your various works!!! :D
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  • From serenagold on February 25, 2010
    I don't trust Dumbledore. First he's all like "Harry, I must kill you when the time comes so that I may defeat Voldemort with your sacrifice." Now he's all like "Harry, I must kill myself so that when the time comes you may defeat Voldemort with my sacrifice."

    Its like he's got the script written out in his mind and he's going to end this thing with a sacrifice one way or another.


    Keep up the great work. (Also, how funny would it be if Draco and Ron end up all buddy-buddy at the end? Ha!)
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  • From Madamdragon on February 24, 2010
    I dont blame harry for not being sure to trust dumbledore or if he shouldnt. hope everything works out in the end
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  • From ANON - SP777 on February 24, 2010
    about #45...

    I have a question..or two.

    1. Will Dumbledore be let in on the secret of the relationship
    between Harry & Severus?

    2. I was reading some stories from way back when and the thing that
    always bugged me is the sudden stop of writing authors do, because
    they lost interest, they relied too much on reviews, they lost
    focus, they couldn't 'find' their muse....or my personal favorite
    used continously 'my computer died'. There's a lot of 'dead' computers
    out there.

    I've always felt, if you're going to write a story have it written out
    FIRST, post it, then make changes as you go. That way if you do hit a
    writers block OR are not getting the 'many reviews' you desire, at least
    the story is written and you're not cheating your readers who ACTUALLY
    enjoyed the story and want to see it END.

    Okay, the question is...have you ever wanted to just up and leave
    a story, because of low reviews or you felt 'uninspired'?

    Be honest.


    PS-I mostly ignore your responses to other folks, BUT I thought
    you said you didn't have another author's name here? Were your
    other stories bad or something?

    I'm just asking...
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  • From ANON - k lave demo on February 24, 2010
    i figured that was it but didn't want to assume. i think the lack of summary on your profile kind of cinched it for me. it was a good start so i think you should be proud of it. i enjoyed it nonetheless. by the way kudos to harry's cruel side hitting something home to dumbledore and i agree that it certainly does seem to a lot of people not just dumbledore that harry, the person, is not "real". also the silent acceptance and snape's championing of harry was refreshing. Viva!
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  • From ANON - KadyRae on February 24, 2010
    Awesome, yet again! It is frusterating though that Dumbledore still has to keep his secrets, and lie even to harry after all of this. Bah. It makes me feel like I am back in Deathly Hollows again... lol

    Love the Snape and Harry dynamic.
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  • From serenagold on February 22, 2010
    Excellent set of chapters. Dumbledore likes to make self-important decisions. Seriously.

    Keep up the great work!
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  • From Madamdragon on February 21, 2010
    loving the updates keep them coming please!
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  • From ANON - SP777 on February 21, 2010
    about # 44...

    1. I want everything settled. I want Voldemort gone and the Death
    Eaters under arrest so that I can be with my boyfriend and my dad and
    things can be normal.

    -awww..that was so freakin' sweet, that my tooth fell out. :-)

    2. Well, you did a plot twist...you haven't done those in like...forever???
    O_o
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  • From ANON - k lave demo on February 21, 2010
    i can't help but think that there is a bad reason/motive behind this kind of decision. nonetheless the "caught-in-a-embarrassing-act" scene was brilliant in how understated it was. also i think that may have been the first time harry casually referred to snape as "dad" in his thoughts without reacting to it. i am currently reading a story by meander and it shares elements that remind me somewhat strongly of your own. it was written in 2006 i believe. Viva!
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  • From ANON - polka dot on February 21, 2010
    Harry should have come up with some elaborate lie while he was with Snape. He could have really milked some sympathy from his friends.
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  • From ANON - AAR on February 20, 2010
    Hey, i do not usually start reading stories that are not completed already, and if i do i do not go back to finish them. yours is an exception! keep going!
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  • From Madamdragon on February 19, 2010
    that was sweet to see snape acting like a father. i thought it was too cute. hope to see more fatherly possessivness. update soon please.
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