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Reviews for Practicing Liars

By : Lomonaaeren
  • From KienaBeana on February 13, 2010
    That was intense... Horribly, terribly, wonderfully intense. I love this whole chapter! I love Ron and Hermione and how they interacted through the chapter, I adore Draco and his Slytherin loyalty to Harry and Snape, but the scene where Snape carries Harry off was... Amazing? Fantastic? Brilliant? Good grief, I don't have words... I can't wait for the next chapter, you are amazing! Thank you
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  • From ANON - SP777 on February 12, 2010
    about #41...

    Sooo...I was kinda hoping to 'see' what emotion Severus accidently
    displayed, but if you WANT to leave it up in the air....

    You know Harry's conversation with his father was reminiscent of a
    child wanting approval from...their parent, of course. I think Harry
    has accepted Snape more than he realizes. Now, if only he'll just
    say that 6-letter word. F-A-T-H-E-R...
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  • From myniephoenix on February 11, 2010
    Excellent, truely excellent !!
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  • From ANON - rafiq on February 11, 2010
    I really like the way you have slowly built the father/son relationship.
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  • From serenagold on February 11, 2010
    Did Harry loose his glamour along with the Horcrux, or was it Snapes reaction to Harry's pain that made them see the reality for what it was?

    Anyway, keep up the great work! Looking forward to your next update!
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  • From ANON - k lave demo on February 11, 2010
    heh. unexpected humor at the end there. thank goodness that's over with. i'm assuming that ron and mione's opposition will have lessened greatly. i don't expect it to go away fully because i don't think they are willing to truly tolerate draco's presence. i don't think the acceptance part will come til later. loved this installment and am looking forward to the next chapter. i'm so glad severus finally got past his hesitation on acting like a father. til next time. viva la vida!
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  • From ANON - polka dot on February 11, 2010
    It felt like it happened a little too quickly like Harry was going to suffer for hours but only ended up suffering for a few minutes. Not that I'm a sadist or anything.
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  • From ANON - SP777 on February 09, 2010
    about #40..

    1. You turned Prof. Snape into your own personal Sherlock
    Holmes! I liked it! ^__^

    It's not all the time you see him being active behind
    the scenes, people just usually put in the classroom,
    the lab OR Dumbledore's office, then he's through for
    the day.

    I'm glad to see him 'stretch' his muscles, so to speak.

    2. By the way, do betas help you with the stories now?
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 09, 2010
    It took me a few days to read the whole story so far, but I'm very glad I did :) I usually steer clear from Draco/Harry romances, they tend to be all the same and it's always hard to believe their motivations for getting together, but it was such a relief to see something so fresh and different! I very much admire the way you've taken time to show they're relationship building over time from distrust to love, offering plausible reasons along the way too, it was quite believeable and very in-character. Your plot is quite complex too and works very well in the scheme of the series. I did think Severus was a little out of character at times, there were a couple of points I thought he may have reacted differently, but I think you portrayed him for the most part - along with other characters - very accurately. It was a joy to read :)
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  • From serenagold on February 09, 2010
    Wow! Great chapters!!!

    Sorry I missed an update, but damn, it only met I got to enjoy twice as much.
    There's too much craziness going on in these chapters for me to pick one thing to comment on.

    Keep up the great work!
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  • From koki on February 09, 2010
    more more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - k lave demo on February 08, 2010
    well, i was right on most of them anyways. honestly didn't expect you to come to a resolution so soon. dumbledore's pretty much lost any hold on harry hasn't he? i think snape will very much appreciate that harry came to him. the situation with ron and hermione feels like someone trying to pull a tooth that isn't quite ready to come out. very painful and annoying but at least they're making progress. til next time! ciao!
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  • From ANON - DTDY on February 08, 2010
    Oh dear, now if she really did it or not.

    I liked how you ended it with the comment of him wanting to hug harry. You worded it wonderfully.
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  • From ANON - polka dot on February 08, 2010
    Sorry Snape, but I gotta root for the girls
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  • From thrnbrooke on February 06, 2010
    40!!!! I sooooo sooooo need chapter 40!!!! OMG!!! I'm hooked!!!
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