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Reviews for A Debt Of Life

By : KatrinaN
  • From Tenar10r on October 12, 2009
    I have just finished your story and want to congratulate you on one of the funnest reads I have had in a while.
    Your characters are lively and your plot-line unique! Thank you for sharing it with all of us at AFF.
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  • From Tenar10r on October 12, 2009
    Before I read chapter three; I just want to tell you that I am very much enjoying your story.
    I also like it when a story is presented in its entirety.
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  • From Tenar10r on October 12, 2009
    more then acquaintances - than
    life of solitary - I would choose the word 'solitude' instead.
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  • From Tenar10r on October 12, 2009
    "dying, of loosing that hope everyone" -losing
    "The room was silent, other then the quiet moaning" - than not then, think of 'then' meaning 'later' if you are having trouble deciding which is correct in a sentence.
    " laid eyes on the boys picture " -boy's picture- you wanted possessive and not plural here.
    "he knew that their was something " - there - spelled 'their' is possessive.
    "killed the boys guardians"- boy's guardians- you want to use the possessive here not the plural.
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  • From anncee on October 12, 2009
    i LOOOOVEEE when stories are posted in their entirety. THANK YOU!! it was a great short story! I love happy endings =]
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