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Reviews for Disillusionment

By : Monddame
  • From MotekElm on March 20, 2017

    Great oneshot


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  • From ANON - Tannara on July 19, 2014
    What a lovely story! :) Thanks for sharing and I didn't think it was the least bit 'creep' in any way! :)
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  • From margotlefaye on December 14, 2009
    Aww. That was sweet. And not too pervy, lol!
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  • From Iysa on December 08, 2009
    Another awesome, just love your stories hope to see more soon :)
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  • From ExperimentalMe on December 05, 2009
    Very sweet and sexy. I liked the ending. Although, being a naughty reader, I would have enjoyed Lucius's discovery that they knew all along that he was hiding and that they quited enjoyed performing for him.
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  • From MistressV on November 08, 2009
    This was delightful. Lucius' little panic attack had me giggling for sure! Now that I've read both Potter fics, I'm going to go and explore your orginal works! Consider me a fan!
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  • From kazfeist on October 28, 2009
    That was just charming! I did read your chapter ficlets over at your LJ, and loved them all. Didn't yet leave a comment, as I wanted to read them over again. :D
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  • From ANON - kimbclar on October 19, 2009
    I loved this! Lucius' reactions were perfect and the Draco/Hermione was very touching.
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  • From DarQuing on October 18, 2009
    Maybe its the inherent story-teller in me, but good one-shots tend to leave me wanting more, and this is a good one-shot. Good one-shots, in my opinion, make for good story-openers. I can see a couple ways of going about this story. You could leave it from Lucius's POV. You could move it to Narcissa's POV. Or maybe even Harry or Ron's POV when they find out that Hermione is engaged to Draco (assuming they didn't know they were already together).

    Overall, I think this was very good. Its whetted my appetite for more and I hope you write more. :)
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  • From Tassanaburrfoot on October 16, 2009
    *Giggles* This story is incredibly witty, well-written, and a great laugh. I really love the endearing ending, as well. Well done!
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  • From Tenar10r on October 15, 2009
    cute!
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  • From on October 15, 2009
    WOW! Loved it!
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 15, 2009
    Naughty Lucius. Great fic!
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  • From HarryGinny4eva on October 15, 2009
    Brava!! A job very well done. It was fun and funny to pity Lucius' place in it all. lol But, the way you wrote it was fabulous. I was able to get the love in the middle of the lust and Lucius' angst. :-) Thank you! HG4eva
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  • From readingwoman777 on October 15, 2009
    Loved it! Kind of interesting to get Lucius' viewpoint, & his, umm, urgent need to consult with Narcissa afterward.
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