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Reviews for The favour

By : sjansons
  • From LolaDiBlack on December 16, 2010
    Loved it!!! oh shit you made me cry in public, it was sweet and bitter and sweet and fantastic!!!! Great work, Love it!!
    Take Care
    Read you soon

    Love
    Lola
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  • From jaceni50 on October 29, 2009
    Wow, I loved it! I don't know if it's ended yet since you haven't labled it complete, but it gives nice closure in my opinion. You did answer the questions I had and the ending made it all worth while. You really tricked me there somewhere, but I'm glad to have been mistaken. I hate that it took so long, but at least they got there before they died. :D Loved it.
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  • From kazfeist on October 28, 2009
    This was a charming story, and a very welcome addition to the fandom. Welcome, come into the Light. :D
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 27, 2009
    Again, both chapters were very bittersweet and full of heartache and regret. I hope you're going to tell us how she ended up becoming Mrs Malfoy after all. I did like to see though, that despite the upheaval there would had to have been, that she and Ron stood proudly at their childrens' sides on their wedding day - Rose and Scorpious - who'd have guessed. LOL I'm totally intrigued now - I want to read some more please. :)
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  • From kimbclar12 on October 26, 2009
    I loved the two additional chapters. I wish there was a little of the reaction to there relationship between the 2nd and 3rd chapter just for continuity. However, even without that it's delightful.
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  • From Baybeetricia on October 26, 2009
    Wow......I can feel the emotion just rippling off the page. And it knocked me off balance, to be honest. Just wow! I just....just....anyway, I should stop now cause I in my English class and I need to focus...but...on to the next chapter :)
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  • From thejojo on October 26, 2009
    oh wow... that was amazing =) you're a brilliant writer and it all fit so well. loved the 'learning sex', its so hermione!! yay!
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  • From margaritama on October 26, 2009
    love the surprise ending....
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  • From jaceni50 on October 22, 2009
    Wow, this is a really complex Hermione. I like it. :) There are a lot of things unanswered that I hope to be able to understand when you continue the story. For example, why didn't she like kisses and did she love him before she asked him to be her first? Can't wait for the next update. :)
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  • From kimbclar12 on October 19, 2009
    Great! I can really see Hermione going to him for this experience rather than Harry or Ron.
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 19, 2009
    Well of course the favour has to be returned. :) It had quite a sad touch to it though, so I wonder if they're going to help each other through such troubled times????
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  • From flamingmoth on October 17, 2009
    Aww. This was a nice one. I like the idea that Hermione is the one to make the first move, and is unafraid even though she's inexperienced.
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  • From DarQuing on October 17, 2009
    Pleeeease write more on this! :D I can see a lot of potential in this story. What happens when the others find out? What if they forget to use protection one time and she gets pregnant? Inquiring minds want to know! :D
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