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Reviews for Salvation

By : clairevictoria
  • From ravwrin on November 19, 2009
    You know, I'm actually quite fond of the lengths of the chapters. I have to say that it's quite refreshing when other stories are so short, your's are wonderfully long. I was iffy at first to read it but got so into it that I could barely put it down! It actually quelled my craving for a novel and kept me guessing throughout. I loved it and have been reading Shamrock, which by the way was equally as amazing.

    Please, continue as you have been doing because what you've been doing has worked!
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  • From abm62 on November 17, 2009
    Love your story! I don't usually like OC but you have developed amazing characters. I am checking every day for the next chapter and speaking of chapters I love your long chapters. It makes for a nice long read and I love it.
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  • From Dracoroxmaisox on November 12, 2009
    ok so i just finished chapter 3, and I love this story. I've been reading it for a couple of days...Those chapters are long, but it doesn't really take away from it!
    i actually wanted to comment about this when i finished chapter 2, but i couldn't stop reading.
    Dylan is a perfectly acceptable girls name. well that was my two cents. I absolutely love Miri tho, and now Pheonix!!! I love your story, and I'm gunna continue reading, so i can catch up!!
    Great Story!
    -Dylan
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  • From Bookworm51485 on November 10, 2009
    I knew that baby was going to be a girl. For two reasons, 1) because in nearly every mpreg story I read, the baby is a girl. I'm having trouble finding baby boys, and I find them to be so much more adorable than girls *sigh* 2) With how they were pushing the 'it's a boy' thing without actually checking, I had a feeling a twist was coming. And then when Luna bet is was going to be a girl, that was it. I wonder how Lucius is going to react, he was expecting a boy. I wonder if a girl would be good enough for him.

    And btw, I noticed that I think you had Charlie written as the older brother. Bill's actually the oldest. I know for awhile I wasn't completely sure which was older but the order is: Bill, Charlie, Percy, Fred and George, Ron and Ginny. I have it all memorized now :-D

    Anyways I'm loving this story and you're really long chapters. And now I'm going to go back and continue reading because I've only just finished the 2nd chapter.
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  • From ladyedgecombe on November 08, 2009
    I just love this story. You did really well in meshing the characters together while deviating from the original universe. Nicely done.
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  • From aoshi4misao on November 08, 2009
    So I love this story, its totally not my normal read and I love it! Everything is out of the normal for me, from the pairing to the originial characters to the themes but I am super glad I started reading it. I love all your original characters and how they fit so well into the story line. I want to cry with Harry when Lucius is being a jerk and I do laugh and smile when things are going well. And even though your chapters are really long its still an nice read, because I know that I'll have something to keep me entranced for a good while. I think that you are doing an amazing job and shouldn't change how your doing any of it, its turning out to be a great fanfic and I'm thoroughly glad that I started reading it in the first place, despite my initial hesitation.
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  • From Hine on November 07, 2009
    I -LOVE- this story! Please! Don't change a thing! I love that your chapters are so long! It makes the waiting for the updates all the more worth while!!!
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  • From serenaros on November 07, 2009
    I just wanted to let you know that I think the length of your stories are just fine to me. I love being able to find a new chapter up and have enough time to curl up into the story instead of feeling like ive been cheated with a couple of paragraphs. And as far as the graphic scenes go, I enjoyed them particularly not because of how graphic but because it was relevant to the story. I think you've been doing an excellent job, with or without reviews.
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  • From on November 07, 2009
    I love this story. I also love the long chapters. Long chapters make the wait for new chapters easier because readers can tell how much time and effort the author put into the story. Keep up the amazing work.
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  • From EneylaElendil on November 07, 2009
    Hey,
    i would just like to say i love this story, and i personally love longer chapters... believe me, the nights i become an insomiac, stories like these help a great deal :). Anyhow, its a brill story and despite the valid questions being posed... we must remember it is fanfiction after all, and as long as the warnings are in place no foul to me.
    Eagerly(?) awaiting the next chapter. appologies for the poor use of grammar and spelling! lol.
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  • From Plaguerose on November 07, 2009
    Wha? Down size the chapter? But! But! But!

    ...

    LOL XD

    I have nothing against it. Short, long, the quantity doesn't matter but the quality. And I adore the quality of the story!!
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  • From CodyMThomas on November 05, 2009
    This is an incredibly awesome (and EPIC) story, I mean dear gods, each chapter could be it's own novella! It takes me 2-3 hours to read one chapter! That's HIGHLY impressive! I want to say 'update soon' but, with how long the chapters are, I understand if it takes you awhile to write them. However, i WILL be waiting patiently for the next one when you post it, I can't wait to see what happens next! ^_^
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  • From QueenB on November 05, 2009
    Ch. 7 Whoa, this story is just one shock after another. Solarin has a Dark Mark! Cue the scary music! Dum-dum-DUM!!

    Seriously, though, this IS a bit much. We could have just had Bellatrix going after Sirius. They ARE cousins and she
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  • From EneylaElendil on November 05, 2009
    Hi,
    I just wanted to drop you a review about this story. I only stumbled across it a few days ago, and having not read it despite this being a repost, i had a look. Its wonderfully written, with passionate romance with different varieties of character and lifestyle. I couldn't stop reading after the first one, and its excited me immensely since when you updated.

    I'd just like to say continue on, my dear, such a wonderful talent need not be wasted.... :)
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  • From QueenB on November 03, 2009
    Ch. 6 I
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