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Reviews for Salvation

By : clairevictoria
  • From Gypsii on October 21, 2009
    Wahhh!


    Great story! I've been reading this since about 2:30pm...its now- 2:41am. What a loooong story! But EXCELLENT! I shall read part 2 tomorrow!
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 20, 2009
    Have to ask, but why did you decide to repost this when there's no new update? :S I had to skim all the way through to make sure I wasn't missing anything I'd already read :S

    Anyways - great story :) I love the detail and emotion, you real capture something in your work, and it's a very enjoyable read. I usually dislike OC's too but Solarin is so unique and interesting, she's so much more 3d than a lot of OC's are in fanfictions. The only thing I would say is maybe you could break the chapters up into smaller pieces? Each one is a huge ammount to read on its own, and for readers without the time it's a huge pain to find out where they were and to carry on from that spot, lol. I do like your story though, and should you update I'd be happy to read more.
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