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Reviews for Carridwen

By : chelbear
  • From undisclosedtoyou on November 19, 2009
    I was going to wait to review after a few more chapters, but hell I might as well do it now.

    I like how you've developed both Draco, and Harry so far. To me, the choices you've made in their professions are both realistic and breathtakingly refreshing. All your characters are enjoyable, even Pansy, who I have to admit was never a favorite of mine.

    I am especially liking how descriptive your being with this story. I can't wait to read the next chapter.
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  • From Digitallace on November 15, 2009
    Oooohh. I always love a good, scandalous party!!
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  • From Digitallace on November 07, 2009
    On a completely unrelated note, Aubin is the name of my brother-in-law. Seth, Aubin and Wilkes....all the boys in my husbands family have great, unique names. I've never heard it used before anywhere else, so kudos.
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  • From Digitallace on November 07, 2009
    Well, well, well. This is the first time I've actually READ a story on here, so clearly your plug worked. *smirk. I usually don't have enough time between writing FF to actually read FF, but I'm enjoying this so far. Interesting idea. I've always been curious about wizarding university, and I smell a fun love triangle brewing. I only wish AFF made it easier to get update alerts....
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  • From on November 07, 2009
    OOOoooo tralala!!! can't lie, if I were draco I would've shot blaise.
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  • From nekoleopard on November 07, 2009
    oh hahaha i loved it made me laugh so hard
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  • From tiggator on November 06, 2009
    This is definitely a good story. Please, keep going. I understand about needing more feedback. I have so many stories that don't get reviews and never know if it's because people don't like them or they just don't like reviewing. I get so excited every time I see a new chapter posted. I truly love how real you keep the characters. I love your portrayal of Pansy here. And the ending where Blaise tells Draco that he's all his...I loved it. :) I can't wait to read more. Keep up the good work! :)
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  • From nekoleopard on November 04, 2009
    i enjoyed it very much
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  • From nekoleopard on November 01, 2009
    hey muffin i was all better just in the nick of time for halloween, now i just have to wait for that neurotic straight man to get back from drinking with his buddies i mean halloween party... i decided to stay home and watch movies(rocky horror picture show lol that movie made me gay i swear)...as much as i love getting mistaken for a woman at the night clubs i thought i would pass this year speak of the devil my straight man just walked in the door and he's really drunk well i better get him to bed
    with love ~monster
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  • From QueenofLoren on October 30, 2009
    yes another chapter very well done. I can't wait for the next.
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  • From nekoleopard on October 28, 2009
    i'll get right on that sweet heart lol i'm feeling much better i almost thought i would be sick through halloween now that would have been a travesty
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  • From QueenofLoren on October 28, 2009
    I like it but i can't wait to see Draco and Harry to get together and see how it turns and what goes on with Blaise as well.
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  • From plainsong101 on October 27, 2009
    Part II
    Partially in response to the reviewer above me.
    I caught that phrase too...I just automatically took it to mean that Harry would prefer to dominate, and was a bit let down to realize that Blaise probably wouldn't take that lying down, so to speak. However...who says you can't switch it up? In this way, i get the feeling that it's a bit more tenuous, Harry still might give in. But soft, what's this? Draco jealous??? Hmmmm....I can't wait for them to have some contact...
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  • From plainsong101 on October 27, 2009
    This story is coming along nicely! I'm also liking your style...you paint a good picture. I LOVE the idea of them being at university!!!! And I really loved the story showing what happened to Draco after Hogwarts to grow him up a bit...It is very believable. Keep it coming!
    btw, Blaise is such a smooth-talker...I wonder how long Harry will be able to resist? Suspense!
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  • From Argo on October 27, 2009
    I wonder about phrase in third chapter: "Harry's thoughts betrayed him as he imagined that Blaise would be the type to dominate rather than be dominated, and he inwardly cursed at the possible loss."
    What loss Harry cursed at? Was it the loss of possibility to dominate Blaise and Harry's desire to be the type just like that: "the type to dominate rather than be dominated", also?
    Or was it the loss of control, he feels he would experience should he try with Blaise something?
    For now, I will hope for the first and assume Harry was disappointed about Blaise being dominant type, because he would like his possible partner to be submissive rather than dominant.
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