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Reviews for Carridwen

By : chelbear
  • From thrnbrooke on October 26, 2009
    Soooo can't wait for chapter 5!!!
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  • From LoverofLove on October 26, 2009
    I really enjoyed this, the setup in itself is quite nice but more important for me is that it was so believable I really felt myself sucked in the 1st chapter (which is currently to the extent I've read, expect more later). The only criticism I can really add is very nit picky. Some specific line just came out awkwardly; one that sticks out fairly prominently is the moment of clarity he had when he realized he should be a reporter. For me personally "And he knew" is just summarization of the writing you seem so capable of doing. Ah but I did enjoy it thoroughly and this line specifically was extremely hot "Blaise stared on, lips parted slightly as though having stopped mid-sentence". Well until chapter too tata and I'm looking forward to the rest.
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  • From SilverLion on October 26, 2009
    Thanks to you, I've now got flashes of a much younger Enrique Iglesias portraying Blaise Zabini in 'Half-Blood Prince' and may I say that it is a VERY INTICING IMAGE! And that flash that Draco had of Harry writhing underneath Blaise? Sounds like fun to me. HEY DRACO! If you don't want to play, I will and you'll lose out!
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  • From nekoleopard on October 26, 2009
    aw thanks your such a sweet heart and no he doesn't he's usless in the kitchen but he does what i tell him he is well trained in that respect he just never shuts up and is always on my back about my sex life (if he wasn't straight i would say he was jealous but as it stands he is but i'll always be flamboyantly gay) well he cleans too so thats nice i haven't had to lift a finger to clean except to do my own laundry since he moved in lol if you wanna chat you can email me like if you want to talk about your story or just chat i'd be glad to my most used email is reaper_the_hacker@yahoo.com oh and i'm really liking the way the story is developing so many twists i'm never quite sure whats going to happen next.
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  • From nekoleopard on October 26, 2009
    lol good to hear and you get dreads with this wax stuff they pretty much just take pieces of hair and slather the stuff in it and wait for it to dry but the only way to get rid of your dreads is to shave them off i still have mine from when i was sixteen i'm 21 now you do the math i got some long hair. ps i really like your writing style
    pps i'm not very good at explaining and i'm not the one who does my hair my bestfriend does it i'm like disabled when it comes to doing hair you'd proly be better off asking a hairdresser
    ppps i'm sick so i'm stuck at home my roomie was like 'ahhhh H1N1' i just swore at him and told him to get me my coffee so an asap post would be nice i'm losing my mind in a tiny apartment with a neurotic straight man *sighs*
    ~much love Monster

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  • From SilverLion on October 25, 2009
    Sooooo......any chance of Harry/Blaise/Draco? BTW, Blaise is black. Possibly of Italian descent, but he's black. So, would that be African-Italian?
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  • From SilverLion on October 23, 2009
    OOOH! I've been reading some 'change-of-school' fics, but I don't think I've ever even seen a college fic. Excellent. I'll be keeping in touch. Cheers!
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  • From nekoleopard on October 22, 2009
    lolz thanks for the shout out and sorry i didn't say much i was tired from work, but any way the chapter was great especially the way you decribed draco's state of mind i did the same sort of trek a few years ago but that was when i had dreadlocks what am i talking about i still have dreadlocks but i digress thanks for the update and i'm looking forword to the next chapter but no need to rush
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  • From spenny806 on October 22, 2009

    Hey,love the story so far. Really like the setting and the way you have moved the characters on in life, very believable actually! A few grammer mistakes I think but nothing major!

    Post again soon!

    x
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  • From nekosneko on October 22, 2009
    Definitely interesting...I have yet to read anything like it. I don't usually read stories like this, but I like the direction yours is going in. I'll be looking for your next update.
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  • From nekoleopard on October 21, 2009
    it looks interesting and i bet anyone could right better than rita skeeter
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