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Reviews for The Expectant Detectives

By : MariaTeresaQuintanar
  • From ANON - arrabella on November 05, 2009
    Yep I am following this 1 too> and the song is Holla Back Girl by Gwen Steffani>
    Are we gonna get a whole circus or jujst the side show?
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  • From anncee on November 04, 2009
    now who could be leaving dead bodies at dear lucius' house?? sounds like they were taken from a circus of sorts...a little man...a contortionist? hmm very curious...

    oh and "cuz i ain't your hollaback boyyy, i ain't your hollaback boyy" lol i remember seeing it on youtube....a friend showed it to me...but i can't remember the name....snake something or other?
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  • From Bluedragon5544 on November 04, 2009
    I think that Lucius had the circus over at his house when he gave the pot to the house elfs. lol. I like how this story is going. I know what the song lyics are to your mini-quiz is : Holla back girl.
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  • From voraciousreader on November 04, 2009
    Someone is leaving defunct circus performers in Lucius' house? Yeep! Now that is one I never, ever would ahve thought of! More, please.
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  • From ANON - Tara on November 04, 2009
    Nice chapter lol sounds like someone is killing circus people. Anyways I think the song is Gwen Stefani "Hollaback girl" Maybe?
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  • From ANON - Mia on November 01, 2009
    I don't know the song. But if I was to take a guess about the artist based on your hint I'd go with Hanah Montana's daddy, Billy Rae Cyrus of Achy Breaky Heart fame.

    I love this chapter. Your humour and intelligence and quirkiness are perfectly balanced.

    ~Mia
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  • From voraciousreader on November 01, 2009
    Oh, just a note on a slight typo in ch 2: it's 'rigor mortis' not Riga Mortis, just so you know.
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  • From KarenHill on November 01, 2009
    Oh I love your new story! Loved how she just blurted the news to Severus. They are so funny together. Can't wait to read more. Update soon.
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  • From voraciousreader on November 01, 2009
    Love the whole 'telling Severus' sidebar going on-LMAO. From the fact that the Aurors are making bets with Lucius, I'd guess they don't really think he's guilty either. Dont know the song and not going to google it.
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  • From katiekrm on November 01, 2009
    "You aren
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  • From Bluedragon5544 on November 01, 2009
    Oh I like the way this story is starting out and I am looking forward to reading more of it. great job.
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  • From voraciousreader on October 30, 2009
    Right. The stoned elves were awesome! LMAO! Now, why is there a permanently horizontal, vertically-challenged corpse under the coffee table? For bizarre humor, you take the award, and I'm already hooked.
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  • From ANON - Mia on October 30, 2009
    I love your stories. They are quirky and wild.

    ~Mia
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  • From Tenar10r on October 30, 2009
    EEEP! Next chapter please :)
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  • From chrisdavis on October 30, 2009
    That Lucius! I'm lovin the story now that I can understand it, had to go back and read the reluctant detectives first before I would let myself read this one. As I said, love the story...not surprising since i love quite a few of your stories apartently which I only noticed today because I am usually not noticing the authors names.

    Im so bad...maybe Lucius should spank me(please,please,please)lol!
    Update soon doll.
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