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  • From KellyJCR on March 14, 2010
    You are killing me. I really thought Sevs self pity and doubting in terms of Hermiones feelings were over. Does he not know her at all? Don't get me wrong I am a sucker for drama as long as things work out in the end. However he has a way of making things so final without the entire story. For some reason the way you wrote this pushed the reality of how busy Hermione had been. Although I find it a little hard to belive that she wouldn't pop down to the lab to at least say good morning if she missed him the night before. Can't wait for more. Well done!!!
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  • From HarryGinny4eva on March 13, 2010
    This was sad. Simply sad. Two people who care for each other this much should not be so misunderstanding of the others needs. For her to immerse herself in work so as not to think about things overmuch and him to simply leave was cowardly, but in character. I hope they find their way back to one another and really talk. They need to learn that compromise must come from both of them. Excellent story and a great update! Thank you, HG4eva
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  • From chickaboo on March 13, 2010
    Oh this is too sad. Please fix it?
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  • From Loubelle on February 14, 2010
    I'm really enjoying this! It's really well written :)
    Please update soon :)
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  • From KellyJCR on February 07, 2010
    Thank you for responding so quickly and with an update as well. I also re-read the chapter and I can see all your points . I was not expecting her to hex Harry or take his opinion into consideration. That would be unlike her she is tired of all the fighting as you said. I just thought she would have had a bit more to say to him in regards to her feelings for Severus and her unability to move on so quickly like the others did. I am already puzzled at Sevs reaction to Hermiones request and I think it may cause Hermione to give more thought to one of Harrys points. Looking forward to more. Well done!!!
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  • From flamingmoth on February 07, 2010
    As always, a great chapter. I like that Hermione has gone back to work and distinguished herself again! And what will Severus do? Inquiring minds want to know!
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  • From randc9394 on February 07, 2010
    Oh,I wondered how the story was going to progress. I'm glad Harry is finally coming to terms. Such a difficult time for Severus.
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  • From LadyofClunn on February 07, 2010
    It's so nice to see that they are in a happy, stable relationship.

    Now Severus just has to be brave and come out of his shell - it might not be as horrible as he thinks. I really hope he will surprise her and show up at the event.

    Great chapter!
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  • From randc9394 on February 05, 2010
    I'm glad you updated. I'm enjoying the story.
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  • From KellyJCR on February 05, 2010
    I love the quote "the urge to fuck her with abandon." . I really didn't expect that to come from you but I loved it. It really suited Severus and the need he would be feeling at that point. I was a bit disappointed with the confrontation with Harry. I thought that you were holding Hermione back a bit. I think there wre many things she would have liked to say but didn't and I'm not sure why. Otherwise I am completely enjoying the story and as usual it is written beautifully. Well done!!!!
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  • From flamingmoth on January 31, 2010
    Oh no, they've made the paper! And what will Minerva do?
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  • From HarryGinny4eva on January 25, 2010
    Yeah! I am really glad you updated. Thank you. Their first time was lovely, sweet, realistic, and loving. Utterly perfect. I am sorry Harry was such a prat, but I am glad neither of them are backing up or backing out. I look forward to much more soon. Thank you!! HG4eva
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  • From catysmom1028 on January 24, 2010
    I like it. Please update soon.

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  • From AngeliqueML on January 23, 2010
    I like the Minerva line too. I can picture her being a very protective mother hen to both of them.
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  • From katiekrm on January 23, 2010
    Harry isn't being a very good friend...again. I hope Hermione gives him a piece of her mind about his friend skills. I absolutely loved the love scene. It was realistic and sweet. Because more than size, the motion of the ocean, or endurance is how much love is in the act and there was lots of love. I bet Minerva will surprise Severus, but that last line was funny.
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