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Reviews for Bastardy/Opportunity

By : Lomonaaeren
  • From ANON - MzPurpleMist on April 08, 2016
    I rarely read HP fanfics after the end of the War and Harry's out of school because they've never caught my interest. Sort of the same eye-rolling boring, cliché filled formulas that everyone else has written. This was brilliant and now I just may have to sort through the rest of your fanfics to find more treasures like this one.
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  • From Severus1snape on December 29, 2015
    Well, I for one am glad you were a bastard Draco!
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  • From thrnbrooke on November 29, 2009
    Gotta hand it to Draco! He know how to get what he wants!
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  • From RyleeJane on November 19, 2009
    I tried to review this once and the computer ate it. So I'll try again. :)

    I don't often read Harry/Draco fic, but every once in a while, I get an urge to. Stories like this one are the reason. I love your writing style. The way you describe facial expressions and movements is so precise and vivid that it's almost like watching a movie. That's a rare talent, in my opinion.

    I can't say that I found the characters to be completely canon-friendly, but I didn't mind the changes at all. I've never been a huge fan of the Weasleys anyway, so I didn't mind the "bashing" at all. Thank you for it. :D

    You're a very good writer and I look forward to reading more of your fic. Thanks!
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  • From ANON - SP777 on November 17, 2009
    Now, THAT was interesting!

    It was almost like a battle of wills between 2 strong minded
    individuals, with the keener mind winning the battle.

    Anyway, Harry does impress me as someone who goes along with
    what everyone else says and never speaks up against those
    who are his friends unless he's mad.

    Not a good thing, holding things inside until they explode.

    All in all, I like that Harry is doing what HE wants for a change.
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  • From Elphaba on November 15, 2009
    Oh I like this one. Great job!
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  • From ANON - MewMew2 on November 14, 2009
    Very well done. Excellent job on both Harry and Draco's character growth/characterization in this one. Bravo!
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  • From ANON - arealdeal on November 14, 2009
    how the f...ck do you do that in a one shot???? Most would take a 30 chapter go to even come close to the depth you get to in one go. Love ya!!!!
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  • From ANON - Rumi on November 14, 2009
    This was an enjoyable story. Initially I didn't like Draco, he was a bit pathetic in how he was stalking Harry, but he grew on me. I like how Harry finally discovered his backbone, but what I loved about the story was this statement:

    "Roddy stared at Draco in disbelief, his eyes popping with an audible sound.
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  • From ANON - Mia on November 14, 2009
    I found this to be enchantingly hilarious. I love the way you write Harry right out of the Ginny ship. It is reasonable and a pov I never even saw or considered until I started reading you. You are startlingly brilliant and I love you. A lot. You may want to look into restraining orders a lot. Thank you for sharing your most excellent writing. It is infinitely entertaining.

    ~Mia
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  • From JtheChosen1 on November 13, 2009
    Amazingly well written! Awesome work! My only regret is that Ron, Hermione, and Ginny never realized that they were wrong in how badly they've treated Harry all those years, but oh well. This was superb to read!
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  • From flamingmoth on November 13, 2009
    I like this a lot! I especially like how nobody in the fic is portrayed as either a "black hat" or "white hat." Real life is more complex than that, and you've done a great job of injecting realism into this story. Oh, and the sex was super hot, too ;)
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  • From ANON - paigeey07 on November 13, 2009
    loved it!!!
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