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Reviews for None the wiser

By : Moongoddess90
  • From ANON - amanda on March 13, 2012
    I love the story so far, I can't wait to see where you go with it. The only downfall is, I wish the chapters were a lil bit longer. Keep updating!!!
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  • From catysmom1028 on December 09, 2009
    I like it. Please update soon.

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  • From dragongirl on December 01, 2009
    Mother of God! What a twist!~... and think that I have to wait until the next chapter comes around that is so unfair... LOL
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  • From angelnomiko on November 20, 2009
    wow that was awsome ..please please update soom i would love to read more .. later for now

    angel
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  • From dragongirl on November 19, 2009
    Ok! We need more and pls tell us who is the third wheel here... I am duing of curiosity.. LOL
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  • From JanisJ on November 17, 2009
    Hey, love the premise.... just a word of constructive criticism-- It helps to put a space in between when a new person starts talking, makes it easier to follow, and figuring out who's saying what. That being said, I really hope you continue cuz I think you've got some great ideas to play with. Especially with Sirius in leather pants!!! MMM! :P Really, I always think of adult Sirius as looking more like the lead singer of The Weird Sisters at the Yule Ball in the fourth movie. YUM!!!! (also like naughty-school-girl-Hermy! He-he :)
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  • From evanone on November 17, 2009
    With their behavior explained your story loks better. Good work.
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  • From dragongirl on November 17, 2009
    He is a jerk. His reasons for not looking for her I do not know them but to be honest their are not good enough. Well this only calls for more details... shall we?
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  • From evanone on November 17, 2009
    Let me get this straight. Inteligent girl hears from her lover's friend information she didn't like, jumps on conclusions, behaves against logic, and drops all fault on a guy who didn't know anything. It's just me or this Hermione behaves idiot (I understant she is OOC, but you took it so far).
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  • From dragongirl on November 16, 2009
    Ok this is intresting... assuming had never get anyone to the right conclusion....
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  • From voraciousreader on November 15, 2009
    I think this is an interesting idea, but there are a few technical issue that would make the story easier to read. I think you might consider getting a good beta to help with your grammar and formatting so that the flow of the ideas wouldn't be confused. Please continue!
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