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Reviews for Anachronism

By : starcrossedkayla
  • From ANON - J on January 03, 2010
    So that why I got deja-vu when I read the ending, you had already posted this story. I was wondering why some of it felt familiar. Still good story, hope all my reviewing didn't get too annoying.
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 01, 2010
    I first want to start off by saying I'm what I like to call a "hummingbird" reader. I tend to flit from series to series, pairing to pairing, without many stories catching my interest. I'll read something from the Originals one day, get bored and move to the Harry Potter series, then a couple of anime titles, Avatar: the Last Airbender, Harry Potter again, and so on (and I'll have a "flavor of the week" pairing for all fandoms). Nothing can keep my attention for long, and I often don't get past stories with more than six chapters-- especially if I think the relationships were rushed or forced/way too Out-Of-Character.

    With that said, I've been roaming the Harry Potter section for a couple of days and I happened by this fic. It immediately stood out from the others I've read, both in quality of writing and the main storyline. I found myself intrigued from the beginning and gorged myself on the nectar of what you have available, only stopping once when I realized I'd stayed up until an obscenely late hour and needed to be in bed. Not only am I impressed with the detail and the thought you put into what you've written, but I am immensely relieved that you kept Severus at a very realistic mindset. He's the same stubborn, snarky man everyone in the fandom has grown to love, and he's at once complex yet easy to understand from a reader's outside standpoint.

    I truly haven't been this captivated by a story (not including actual books) in quite a long time, and I was quite disappointed to find that there were no more chapters when I finished Chapter 15. Because of this, I wait with bated breath for the next installment. I know this was originally written as one large piece, and I can see why there was the need to split it up, but I suppose I'm one of the rare few who would like to read it in its entirety if it were elsewhere-- like your livejournal account, or something similar.

    Regardless, I look forward to the next update.

    --Wir
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  • From ANON - J on December 31, 2009
    Awwww....

    And their romance was going so well and to be honest, I was hoping those memories would return. Only turns out there are none, unless Snape is wrong which on anything that isn't Harry's personality, he rarely is. Still a good story and I will keep reading of course.

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  • From ANON - J on December 29, 2009
    Well, well, well that was san interesting turn. I think any chance of cruelty is over, Severus seems hooked on Harry now and it looks like his memories will return soon, so I am very interested in where the story is going (not that I ever wasn't interested).
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  • From ANON - okoko on December 28, 2009
    YES!!! finally they make up!!

    wow so much waitin but it didnt disappoint, it was marvellous! wicked absolutely wonderful!!

    hahaha now severus is also as sex-adict as Harry alredy was hahaha, love it. love him, love you.

    your story is so much complex, but interesting at the same time, its not too simple but shows how complex life could be if any of us would be in that situation. lov it

    by the way of my english is horrible forgive me! its not my birth language hehehe
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  • From ANON - J on December 26, 2009
    Your welcome! Hope my reviews aren't getting annoying. I'm enjoying the role reversal, now Severus wants it but can't get it, which is only fair for the moment after what he did to Harry. Harry finally has control and he seems very much to know it.
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  • From mrequecky on December 25, 2009
    Sweet Merlin, loooved it!!!
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  • From ANON - J on December 23, 2009
    Excellent some progress is being made. And an interesting plot twist on the nature of Severus's condition, now I wonder why he did that?
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  • From ANON - seraphiccandy21 on December 22, 2009
    beautiful. Just beautiful. The way it all just seamlessly comes together...and what excellent use of le petit prince. Loved that book. Read it for teh first time only a year ago( in German mind).I could have pointed out to Sev that the answer was with harry but he has to make the same mistake again...just like in that movie...erm, Eternal sunshine of the something mind. You know the one... anyway, that last chapter really made me cry.Was sitting here with tears in my eyes. Simply lovely. Very moving.
    Oh and P.S. Just so you know. It is linguistically speaking impossible for somebody to learn French up to the level that harry seems to have mastered it as language fosilisation takes place after 14 years old or so. Not that it couldn't be mastered up to a certain level per se but he seems to be able to speak it to well for a few years of instruction( I presume he could already speak it when he got together with Severus). Just my 2 cents and 2 years of linguistics classes that were, apparently ,not a complete waste ^_^
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  • From ANON - J on December 22, 2009
    Indeed it did he's finally got the idea and it's about time too. He'finally got the idea that the relationship is REAL. Shame that The straw has been pilled onto Harry recently so that this is likely the piece of straw that broke Harry's back and his tolerance for this.

    Some interesting directions for you to go on if Severus has really changed, I look forward to it.
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  • From mrequecky on December 22, 2009
    Oh, oh. Now I start regretting wishing for Harry to be done with Snape's treatment...
    I hope they start talking... Loved the chapter!!!
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  • From mrequecky on December 21, 2009
    Oh, Harry really had too much. Loved it!
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  • From ANON - J on December 20, 2009
    And a good thing too. As Harry himself pointed out, he can't walk all over Harry and expect to get away with it. Still enjoying it and seeing some more hints of the man Severus was and hopefully will become.
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  • From ANON - okoko on December 19, 2009
    I cannot believe snape did that. i mean i know he could be a sadictic bastard if he wanted, but not like this. he raped harry, and i dont even know how harry had left the option open of further discuss. i mean i wouldnt.. obviously.. jajaja

    man, your story is THE best story ive read in adultfanfiction. really. THE best harry/snape fic. SO AWESOME

    BY THE WAY MERRY CHRISTMAS AND HAPPY NEW YEAR TO ALL!!!
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  • From ANON - J on December 19, 2009
    Ok now this has finally got Snape realising just how far from his perception the world really is. Then again, if committing an act just a little bit away from rape doesn't snap him out of self delusion then nothing will. Harry has been helpful all the way, and while I hope this gets fixed, this will take a lot more than just a quick apology. It would be interesting if this Severus in one way or another actually encountered the one Harry knows and somehow it would a pleasant encounter for the one now. Still fascinating story keep em coming!
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